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I'm a story adict. i watch & read everything. Introduction done, bye~ P.s. i was 14 when i wrote that stories, i deleted the ch but can't delete the cover QAQ Need help, waiting offline!
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I'll be waiting for it~ hehe :3
Chille, instead of using caps for system dialogue, you should use [ dialogue ] Because reading the caps makes me imagine the system voice screaming at me. But when i see the reaction of the mc, i know it's not. Also, the name se Yun should be used as Se Yun. Because the front name se without caps in front is kind of weird. You should also pay attention to spaces between each sentence after each dot and coma. Good luck in writtig :)
Idk, i just kinda get angry halfway through the story. I hate the perverted mule. I want to kill it and destroy it to a hundred of pieces. Its a shame that i'm gonna drop this precious gold just because of one character, but i just cant take it ,_, i rlly want to chop the mule to pieces from the point of view of a female. i rlly wish for it to be grinded into dust!
which leg? :v