great character (arguably) with nice plot but the pacing is too slow. the author is really long winded and would often explain the explanation for a whole chapter. this has the potential to be way better if the author focused on the story and not the word counts.

everything about is good but the writing style specifically the the switching of first person. sometimes its the mc sometimes its another character which breaks the immersion. i tried to get into it but the writing just is not up to par.