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I like the story so far, i do read the MTL version. Compare to MTL version you mentioned the one you create are entirely new story and more interesting, you should mention you inspired from the MTL version, rather mention you translated from there. The synopsis also different, over there (MTL) the MC super OP and every time 'Golden List' show up, the MC will get twice the reward or more. In fact, the 'Golden List' more a less MC own system like Rebate sort of system. So, hope you don't drop the story.
Kinda short thou, i don't even managed to get the feeling reading it
Here i thought u get inspiration from Drinking Makes You Stronger in Naruto World, but after read the chapter, lol nope i guess, i bet alot comedy will shown on this one, correct me if wrong
Im confuse with some stuff regarding this chapter, hope author can enlighten me. For Xatu Breakthrough or parameter i assume 'SS' but the vitality, strength and so on, only at 'S' or the 'SS' for Xatu mention here for potential? Same goes for mothra parameter at 'SSS' but the stat only shown 'SS', the only difference i spot between Xatu and Mothra, first at Blue potential and the later at light Purple, if the author mention 'SS' at blue and 'SSS' as Purple...... i wonder what aurora entitle as 'SSSS' or ....... will mention later on. Furthermore, the twin chibi also shown as 'SSS' parameter but what i see only at 'C'/'D' and their potential yet to reach purple, hope author can clarify on this. Thanks on the chapter.
The story quite interesting, even thou at early stage of the novel, its look alike the same for most fan fiction novel, so what i wondering when will be the 2nd spirit Qilin and 3rd spirit (i forgot) will show up in the plot, are there going to have 10k year old for the 1st ring?100k/200k/1m if that happen kinda to OP. Just keep update the story will become ur fan
at least you have summary already, waiting for it