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Dennis0Ribeiro4mthReplied to Dennis0Ribeiro- Dennis0Ribeiro5mthCommentedCh 167 Chapter 167: Lonely
- Dennis0Ribeiro6mthCommented
Shinedawn's Enemy or Imagine Dragons Enemy?
Enemy - Dennis0Ribeiro6mthCommented
Clones, what about naruto clones or Dr Strange time clones?
I realize that even five girls hard to upkeep even with Time Manipulation. I simply don't have the emotional capacity. While I am ripping off Fate Merlin, I am not that Merlin, I do have a heart despite my actions so far... - Dennis0Ribeiro11mthCommented
Why say so much when you can say "And why'd I when I can kill you at any moment and you couldn't resist". The rest is monologue.
Tatsuya still in his expressionless mode said, "well I didn't knew that you were a Youkai till I picked you up from the river and to why I saved you because you were gravely injured and also you were cute and your fur was very soft...oh it felt so good~. And before you ask why I let you stay even after you were healed. The answer to that question is simple I didn't felt any ill intent from you towards me or my family and it was also fun being with you, you should see your face which you make while eating." - Dennis0Ribeiro11mthReplied to ultrahi
It's not about the references, in the beginning and even after Mc recover all the characters had a little feeling of realness but now is "MC do something -> peanut gallery react -> MC do something... Oh, he's God" and MC lost his bipolar personality between mad dog and egotistical cold thief to be a generic MC type "I OWN MY DESTINY, NOBODY ORDERS ME" type of generic.
But he didn't know. Axel was nothing like him. The difference in mindset of the two was like comparing a mortal trying to predict a god's actions. - Dennis0Ribeiro11mthCommented
The tone changed to xianxia lately
But he didn't know. Axel was nothing like him. The difference in mindset of the two was like comparing a mortal trying to predict a god's actions. - Dennis0Ribeiro1yrCommented
That Riddick's dog?
(A/N: Give me your ideas for a good pet. I already thought of a good one but maybe you guys would have a better idea.) - Dennis0Ribeiro1yrReplied to Dennis0Ribeiro
- Dennis0Ribeiro1yrPosted
Review after 100ch The FL is God, famous hacker, expert in martial arts, legendary fashionista and God designer. Except that her malicious sister can take advantage of all her skills. She did a few paintings and promised her mother to never paint again, her sister stole hers and she never tried to expose her even after being provoked for almost 50ch for the same thing. She wrote a script for a film during class and her sister copied and claimed hers. She did something? NO. If I wanna know what she will do? NO. So I will just drop it.
- Dennis0Ribeiro2yrCommentedCh 187 Reo's Hardcore Love
- Dennis0Ribeiro2yrCommentedCh 1009 Ash Vs Diantha
- Dennis0Ribeiro3yrPosted
The writing is good and all, the world building isn't bad, characters description almost nonexistent. In the whole is good but there's something bugging me. Why he has to show all the steps to his revenge? It's not just explaining to make the MC seem more smart but to show a flashback of each step projected in the mind of the main antagonist. It would be better a back and forth between the two with sometimes the mc answering the villain his doubts with half answers leaving him to answer on his on or make questions to lead the villain on thinking.