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HdueLKiera

HdueLKiera

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  • HdueLKiera
    HdueLKiera1yr
    Replied to HdueLKiera

    maybe it will be fixed later

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    Multiversal: The Shop
    Anime & Comics · Charlottes
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  • HdueLKiera
    HdueLKiera1yr
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    It's too early to comment on this but(only 6 chapter read) "Story Development" and "World Background" i can't comment as i haven't read much and let's come "Character Design" mc is so weird, how do i explain mc previous life "poor" its okay but now he so rich right? so why still pretending to be poor undeveloped character (unaccustomed to his new life like never lived) i think he mc needs improvement.

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    Multiversal: The Shop
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  • HdueLKiera
    HdueLKiera2yr
    Replied to Try_hard

    yes, that sounds good. Neither too simple nor too exaggerated. What do you think?

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    Omni-Dimensional Chat Group [dropped, read the rewrite]
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  • HdueLKiera
    HdueLKiera2yr
    Commented

    i think Cursed poison princess is good, but goddess word excess

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    Omni-Dimensional Chat Group [dropped, read the rewrite]
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  • HdueLKiera
    HdueLKiera3yr
    Commented

    Ch-383 Leylin Farlier Magus Rank: Rank 3 Warlock Bloodline: Giant Kemoyin Serpent Str:23.6 Agi:20.1 Vit:35.7 Spiritual force:203.4 Magic power:203

    [Beep! Leylin Farlier. Rank 3 Warlock, Bloodline: Giant Kemoyin Serpent. Nascent Knight. Strength: 43.1, Agility: 38.4, Vitality: 49.3, Spiritual force: 213.3, Magic power: 213 (Magic power is in synchronisation with spiritual force).]
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    WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION
    Anime & Comics · Keetarp
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  • HdueLKiera
    HdueLKiera3yr
    Replied to Ernestly

    Game name: Bloody spell

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    While Others Cultivate, I Use My Multiverse System
    Eastern · MotivatedSloth
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  • HdueLKiera
    HdueLKiera3yr
    Replied to HdueLKiera

    Ohh sorry 1 kill

    Ch 266 Capítulo 264: [Dragons Rioting] (11)
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    Origen [Español]
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  • HdueLKiera
    HdueLKiera3yr
    Commented

    I Hope MC kill side character because, 2 evil dragon and no kill i am so sad. Vol.1 kill Zombie Vol.2 mecha, no kill Vol.3 2 evil dragon MC and no kill?? Why?

    Ch 266 Capítulo 264: [Dragons Rioting] (11)
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    Origen [Español]
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  • HdueLKiera
    HdueLKiera3yr
    Replied to Pill_Guy

    I mean we almost reached the finals. Mc is have army(3 hollows) and ruthless (hollows eat??). It's really good background But if you write 2.book, of course i read. I just didn't want it to end because i like this novel, of course you don't have to listen to me. sorry i talken too much. I hope you will be more successful.

    Ch 47 Challenge Accepted
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    Becoming Orihime Inoue
    Anime & Comics · Pill_Guy
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  • HdueLKiera
    HdueLKiera3yr
    Commented

    Will there be other universes or only bleach-verse. Because MC is going OP.

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    Becoming Orihime Inoue
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  • HdueLKiera
    HdueLKiera3yr
    Commented

    Chifuyu Orimura

    Ch 812 As long as it isn't too much
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    Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group
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