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It's too early to comment on this but(only 6 chapter read) "Story Development" and "World Background" i can't comment as i haven't read much and let's come "Character Design" mc is so weird, how do i explain mc previous life "poor" its okay but now he so rich right? so why still pretending to be poor undeveloped character (unaccustomed to his new life like never lived) i think he mc needs improvement.
yes, that sounds good. Neither too simple nor too exaggerated. What do you think?
i think Cursed poison princess is good, but goddess word excess
Ch-383 Leylin Farlier Magus Rank: Rank 3 Warlock Bloodline: Giant Kemoyin Serpent Str:23.6 Agi:20.1 Vit:35.7 Spiritual force:203.4 Magic power:203
Game name: Bloody spell
I mean we almost reached the finals. Mc is have army(3 hollows) and ruthless (hollows eat??). It's really good background But if you write 2.book, of course i read. I just didn't want it to end because i like this novel, of course you don't have to listen to me. sorry i talken too much. I hope you will be more successful.