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Arquimedes2yrCommentedThe story is interesting so far, I look forward to future plot developments. I wonder if this planet is related to a certain place from the Primordial Dimensions book (I know the author mentioned his novels sharing a multiverse). I'm keeping it vague to avoid spoiling people who haven't read that one yet.
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Have the information of -> Have information of
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wont -> won't
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silver wear -> silverware Dinners -> Dinner's
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does there take at -> gives their take on
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and she turns -> and turns says in an attitude of -> says with the attitude of
She lightly smacks dads shoulder and she turns back to the T.V. "Maybe I can be an actress and we will never have to work a day in our lives again. You don't know." She says in an attitude of a child, she was the one that always got out of trouble with dad. Mom made up for it a lot, pretty soon there will be friction between the two of them. - Arquimedes3yrCommented
now days -> nowadays
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revises story's online -> revises stories online payed -> paid
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to see if I was really alright -> to see if I am really alright
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I don't feel good > I don't feel well
My question finally gets through to her and she turns around with a smile. "Hey sweetie, do you need anything?" Even when she is doing all the work she still wants to ask if I need anything. I silently nod my head no at her and she gives me a worried look. "Are you feeling alright Cera? You don't look so good." I don't feel good, it is hard to wrap your head around the fact that you traveled back in time from your horrible future. - Arquimedes3yrCommented
walk in the kitchen -> walk into the kitchen cant -> can't
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- Arquimedes3yrReplied to TimelessTale
4 hours ago the author on the original website (qidian, look for the chinese name of the novel 重生之最强剑神 on google to find it) announced that he is coming back from the hiatus and the novel is resuming (in chinese) on the 15th of november! You can find the announcement at: m.qidian.com/book/3471716/596465713
- Arquimedes3yrReplied to Daoist299292
Though I think I already replied to a comment from you... 4 hours ago the author on the original website (qidian, look for the chinese name of the novel 重生之最强剑神 on google to find it) announced that he is coming back from the hiatus and the novel is resuming (in chinese) on the 15th of november! You can find the announcement at: m.qidian.com/book/3471716/596465713
- Arquimedes3yrReplied to Unknownisthetruth
- Arquimedes3yrReplied to Daoist299292
4 hours ago the author on the original website (qidian, look for the chinese name of the novel 重生之最强剑神 on google to find it) announced that he is coming back from the hiatus and the novel is resuming (in chinese) on the 15th of november! You can find the announcement at: m.qidian.com/book/3471716/596465713
- Arquimedes3yrReplied to Dr_DarkFrost
4 hours ago the author on the original website (qidian, look for the chinese name of the novel 重生之最强剑神 on google to find it) announced that he is coming back from the hiatus and the novel is resuming (in chinese) on the 15th of november! You can find the announcement at: m.qidian.com/book/3471716/596465713
- Arquimedes3yrReplied to Subo_Chanda
4 hours ago the author on the original website (qidian, look for the chinese name of the novel 重生之最强剑神 on google to find it) announced that he is coming back from the hiatus and the novel is resuming (in chinese) on the 15th of november! You can find the announcement at: m.qidian.com/book/3471716/596465713
- Arquimedes3yrReplied to BadMash
4 hours ago the author on the original website (qidian, look for the chinese name of the novel 重生之最强剑神 on google to find it) announced that he is coming back from the hiatus and the novel is resuming (in chinese) on the 15th of november! You can find the announcement at: m.qidian.com/book/3471716/596465713
- Arquimedes3yrReplied to 2lazy2care
4 hours ago the author on the original website (qidian, look for the chinese name of the novel 重生之最强剑神 on google to find it) announced that he is coming back from the hiatus and the novel is resuming (in chinese) on the 15th of november! You can find the announcement at: m.qidian.com/book/3471716/596465713