To get to the point the point the title of the novel really pulled me in, but from reading so far it is not what I expected. I imagined the MC living through Naruto’s dark life as a summary and the story picking up when he ultimately makes the decision to leave Konoha. But all I have read so far is things that should have been told in a flashback summary. The chapters are too short with nothing interesting happening. Everything is just information of thing we already know with no change. Except for his bloodline that is a nice and different perspective for the MC. My recommendation would be that if your going to keep the same pace age wise then start making changes to canon or have some other character interactions. His basic skills should be learned and told in bref mentionings not whole chapters ( cause chapters are small).

Besides what we already know about the Marvel Universe, there is no world building or environmental descriptions. The initial character background is what you woild expect, so no problem there. Everything that happens from the point the MC merges with the other two identities is garbage. I can say that as an America I love the works that I find on Webnovel, but then I find fanfictions like this one. The english grammer is a disgrace. I have absolutely no idea what a major park of each chapter is trying to convey. The way additional characters are introduced is subpar at best and that is if you can understand the information leading to the character introduction. The way i would describe the MC is if you took a child, maybe about 10 years old, gave him his favorite villains powers and placed him in another world. There is nothing logical about this fanfiction. If you know about Darkseid then you know that only the strongest of females have the chance of producing his offspring. But this is a fanfic so I get that we want to be with our favorite characters. Overall I have only read about 6 chapters and I can not stomach the horrible butchering of the english language. If you are going to make a fanfic in another langage, then do so with the ability to not come off as a kindergartener throwing a tantrum. I would have probably made it a little further in your novel if not for the unreadable grammer/english, poor story line, unrecognizable plot (just plan wish fulfillment novel), and subpar ability to describe anything going on. I do believe you have some nice ideas that are worth being put on Webnovel. You just do not, at this time, have the proper ability to deliver it in a way the native American english speakers would be willing to consume. The first thing that stops me from investing in a fanfic is poor understanding of the English language and the excuse that english is not someone’s first language. It would be like me going to another country doing something bad and using the excuse that i did not know to disperse all wrong doing. But that is enough of a tangent.

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I enjoy this novel so far. The reason being that it is different then your typical novel. I would like to see more of this style of novel. Everything is put together rather nicely.

You have to think about it. itachi joined anbu at a very young age not to ment how strong madara and hishirama would have been at that age

Mark of the king? Is it the tiger stripes?

I would go with the fox race!

Thank you for the chapter! Keep up the great work.

This book is simply great. I love that even though the main character knows that in order to grow you have to remain low key he also knows when and how to act. With the reward system the main character seems to be on a fast track to being an Overpowered character, but the story background has already developed in a way where the main character is already far behind and if he want to continue his current lifestyle then he has no choice but to become more powerful faster.

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