Kid_Kayor

why is he surprised

Writing quality is wack, syntax isn't that good and we hear the same words over and over. Power ups just come from the most basic things making it so he'll be OP in no time. All the characters are one dimensional and nonsensical, I mean what's the point of a stepmother paying servants to torment a stepson with a dead mother and mental issues, his father also gave up on him, he's not going to inherit anything so what's the point. Give a reason for your characters actions and not make them do stuff just to fit the plot.

Their names are pretty similar

He left like ten chapters ago, have you even been reading

lol

*dinner