SirenBlack

not needed drama. be resposible how egotistic to create a null character who is not worthy of the ml???? the villlain is so contrived. and u call uself a writer. this sucks. all for coins

the fl is the most pathetic pick me girl ever. cloy but nit smooth so pathetic a reflection of you know who, authornim

beth is not needed as a character. she is a menace. she exposed ger friend wether unknowingly. because she was in danfer wh y would a level headed person with a brain expose her friend's digital footprint. bless her heart she is all about clout

thid is the se ond time beth brought danger to Lou. i dont trust her and she is N Irhead. no matter how pureheartee u cant have a friend this stupid. i will die

seeiously this is beyong spiiled. she is such a pick she rakes on my nerves. gosh! a reflection of someone, dear author

i think authir un this case was stupid in making her not act on what she saw. how can the fl be so stupid????? even if u are scaree if she was really righteous, how can she just assume that the man died??? at the bery least she could have called the police. what if the man was atill alive??? she did the unforgiveable

i stay for the story but i hate coy characters. the innocence is contrived. teen biys actinf like old foggies except for men like gormones. thats the only accurate

too much info on side characters. its annoying

the scene eith the kid is so annoyingly not needed. this is just prolonging a convo that should have happrned at the beginning of the chapter. the extra charactee is not needed in the plot at all. waste of words

i like this part. the author did a good job in this chapter