so is the mother dead

i didn't ask?

hey... cats are cool

illegal fight match

hope those two wont be the love interest. especially the hoe one.

those two can die of stress for all we care. it's a nice touch i say. of how progress the fire nation has become as a country. perhaps could have executed better but really not that surprising. electricity plays a great role in human civilization. If the Royalty refuse to share the knowledge of bending lightning after nearly half a century, there's something wrong with them.

lol webnovel great description.

are you trolling or just straight up stupid? the Avatar Gang stop Jet from destroying fire nation village as it also means killing innocent people. the Avatar universe might not see the exact war crime the same thing as we do. but a genocide is still genocide. killing innocent people is still killing innocent people the MC even threaten to kill an enemy wife and child just so he can get what he wants. and MC definitely will do it without hesitation since hes character is similar to that of MC from chinese story. the genocide part is partially a joke but really, the MC character type is the one who will unironically commit a genocide for whatever reason.

such an inferior backward mindset. Countless great literature, both original work and fanfiction write realistic politic, history and such. Not a single one of them use the excuse of "it is just fiction, thus it does not matter" for their lazy writing, differentiate what is a trash writing and what is good and the great. Lotr. GoT. Starship Trooper. and even the original work that this fanfiction is based on, Avatar The Last Airbender put effort into its history, politics and such. For example, when Uncle Iroh refuse to be one who will take down his brother, Firelord Ozai, as he realize the world and history will see it as brother killing another for power. That is some good realistic writing when it comes to politics. the writer could easily just give Iroh some unrealistic reason, basically lazy writing or a plot hole and hopes for the best that fanboy such as yourself will defend them by saying, "It just fiction. It does not matter." There's a reason why ATLA is one of the best cartoon series. It would not be if the writer of the series has similar mindset like yours.

man you need to get a life lol

clearly you don't know how politics works or read history.

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ao charles gonna be a baddie now?

no good parents beat their kids. their method might not be the best or perfect, but that doesn't necessarily mean they are a bad or abusive parents. that is no brainer.

chapter 35 more or less

ya no? the age gap is pretty big unless both don't care, it would lots of word to explain n explore how their relationship came to be. probably easier to find someone else. maybe a normal gf lol while supes are courting him but refused.

There is word that describes a person attitude that is not immature or mature attitude. It is either one or the other. And I hope you not foolish enough to lie to me and to yourself the author attitude to criticism is "mature". But if you do find a word that describes the author attitude, not immature but not mature either. Do let me know, would love to know such word. The author showing his true colour/character is the fact he has a strange grudge against a fictional character, name Yamcha. He turn one of the respectable character in the OG series (before Toriyama butcher and neglect him in Z series and its sequel) into a half arse comic relief (or I assume it is comic relief) and plot convenient for the reason the story is following the canon route and y'know anywhere but the canon route, basically lazy writing. Yamcha is probably not even a comic relief considering how 2D little depth in his character, acting like a chinese arrogant character, seriously the whole story is written like those chinese novel filled with arrogant character from left to right. Is there any reason for Yamcha IQ to turn into room temperature other than plot convenient a.k.a lazy writing? Nope. Not that I can think of. Oh, and he also die despite the fact Yamcha is a veteran martial art fighter who received warning to not underestimated the enemies. Also can we talk about how the Gohan, the MC just deliberately was never there when the Saiyan arrive, allowing them to wipe a city from the face of the planet and fighting the Z warrior resulting Yamcha death and telling Vegeta about the Dragonball? What was it that Gohan while the Saiyan pods arrive in his planet? Was he jerking off or something? Literally epitome of lazy writing. Which is nothing wrong about putting half arse effort into their story. it is a fanfiction, but to pretend their writing is anything but lazy writing is so shameless.

i give two REVIEW one 2. something star only because i do my best to do review those five category shit that webnovel force you to like world building review and update rate the other is 1 star because I realize it mean shit and nobody really care about review or even put effort into writing one, plus the fact Author show his true colors and his real opinion about Yamcha. So I just gave my honest rating without caring about the story constant update. The author was acting manchild long before I even gave him a rating of 1 star or the first review. Seriously who called a reader a fanboy just because they point out how OCC a character is acting.

unfortunately hw gonna treat Yamcha much more worse.