Eldermask

Its a decent story, with a complete focus on harry potter. My main issue is with the grade of the gacha. A silver is basically worthless, gold is only sometimes usefull but no feeling that its actually the essence of gacha. No methods for gaining more draws.

wouldnt this mean he would feel pain like 24/7? Cuz when I had a growth spurt it hurt like mtf, being a baby that would mean constant growth spurt :S

What is the xp growth? Cuz telekines requires 1600 xp for lvl 6. For level 5 you need 400. But then for preminotions you need 5400 xp at lvl 18 for 19.

wouldnt his angel form give him even better understanding of the meaning of runes? like complete instead of more than likely only partial?

+1

to me the question isnt will he become a jedi but more like will he stay a jedi.

well in legends you have master faye. she is older than or as old as yoda and human.

Somehow 6 times as expensive and not even half as effective as the chalice.

The idea behind it and the narative surrounding harry is good. But In 2 chapters I read the same thing like 4 times slightly different. Combine that with the fact that it hasnt been proofread. The only reason it has 3 stars from me is that the things beyond writing quality are actually decent.

Honestly loving this story, the main character is beautifully ridiculous. Cant wait for more chapters. But honestly well done, Its a great story.