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Good start, some nice points for changes. Cant wait to see where he takes it. Would the elixir also work on Superboy? Afaik he is dying, right?
I enjoyed the story, I would like for you to continue. But you do you, final call is up to you.
why is no one from fairy tail or the other guilds responding to him killing people. as far as I know theyre pretty much against killing since it is also against the law unless special circumstances.
i would make that out of combat and in combat /10
The only case of it being beneficial is Ichigo, and that is more than likely an another version and he grew up with it instead of suddenly being Shinigame/Hollow. He is also a tribrid.
As far as the public knows in the MCU, Jarvis is a VI. As for how far he truly is at this point in time isnt mentioned. It could just be a VI that is extremely close to being a AI.
How does she assist? Isnt she in a spaceship? Vegito should only know instant transmission which can only transport oneself to another Ki signature? Did he leave a clone (Tien's technique DB) as a beacon? Seems a bit abrupt, with no context that Gohan suddenly mastered the SSY4 when in previous chapters he wasnt even attempting it yet...
so yanoshi didnt die in the battle between him and the evil saiyan on sadala? which lead eventually to the destruction of sadala? afaik cumber is the evil saiyan or the kid of the evil saiyan leader.
Great story, while I do believe the repetition could be less it is mainly from different POV's so meh. I do enjoy reading it. As for the making a wife for him, it was more creating someone that could understand his perspective since he is unique as far as they know.
only twice after 5 years? I assume that is under suppression?