Eldermask

The idea behind it and the narative surrounding harry is good. But In 2 chapters I read the same thing like 4 times slightly different. Combine that with the fact that it hasnt been proofread. The only reason it has 3 stars from me is that the things beyond writing quality are actually decent.

Honestly loving this story, the main character is beautifully ridiculous. Cant wait for more chapters. But honestly well done, Its a great story.

Its not a bad story, but you can feel the AI in some places especially with inconsistencies like conversations that differ between chapters.

Previous chapter the list already contained Beerus. If you use AI atleast check your content.

she isnt a vamp yet at this point. Has to die first.

no oroblem with the iris relationship. only point i dont get is barry not being aware of the plot. he knew harrison wells was eobard so should also be aware of the clone guy, and the others. or did he only get the borad strokes?

If you google it then the answer would be 6-7 with some starting earlier.

wasnt it catelyn?

wouldnt the 5 points into wis have doubled his mana regen instead of increased it roughly by 1/7th?

always liked the name but harry doesnt know about azkaban so it doesnt fit [img=proud]