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He also introduced himself as Peter or Starlord right? So calling him Quill then doesnt fit.
But does a lion hunt a rabbit with all of his capabilities? He believes her below him and doesnt think he needs to go all out.
Why Unfortunately? Shouldnt it be fortunately. Because now it reads that airtight and life support is bad.
Blood is said to taste like metal and coconut is the key taste of a bounty bar
You should have just described what happened in the movie aka him somehow surviving in a metal suit.
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You might wanna check the second sentence here
Agree on the second * but the first is technically correct, they work for anyone.
He meant it more in the groups of flames than the actual type of flame. But yes I agree that the earth flame was OP and only lost because of Plot Armor
While I wont say I am not disappointed at 3 chaps a week, I get it. I prefer you to not run yourself ragged. So take it easy take a breath, and do it at a pace you are comfortable with.
Ehm editing issue?
you mentioned he was a top ten fortune 500 company. his current net worth doesnt fit that description.
Because he want to devour all the magical energy of the world, not just the cursed energy that cursed spirits use.
Yeah but from what? His mother is my guess.
you have not before justice, so the sentence doesnt work.
Great story, I do like the interactions with Cooler, he always seemed like the 'cooler' Frost demon. I do hope to see a universe jump to 6 or the DBS 7 Canon. I am wondering however if he will attain super saiyan 4, its honestly my favorite transformation. The Super Sayain God is just that, it pushes the saiyan into godhood, the super saiyan 4 drags out every bit of potential and true form that they have.
isnt it secund etappe or whatever for bankai and resurrecion for shikai?