This is one of the better stories I have read on this app so far. The biggest down fall of this novel is the simple fact that it is too short and knowing how long it usually takes writers on here to actually update their stories its probably not going to be updated for a hot minute, I think that would be a shame so author of this fantastic novel please keep updating in a timely fashion!

This is a great story with the fantastic plot and story line so please hurry up and update this story. I hope you are not going to leave unfinished like this because it would definitely disappoint your readers!

great story keep up the updates on a good speed and also please don't stop writing the story just because u can't think of anything else to write that is why us readers are here for we can give u suggestions and u just pick the one that works for u and add on to it or change it the fit the way you wanted the directionof the story to go when u first wrote it!