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Chardcias17hCommentedAlistair :"I can say the N-word?!"- Chardcias2dCommented"Just don't..." Furina then lowered her hand and looked at Isaac. "Let's just don't do 'that' yet... Alright?"
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THE UMU EMPEROR
"Chill bitch, I was just fucking around." He narrowed his gaze in a way that promised vengeance, "Besides, I already know Nero a chick. She the OG umu gal." - Chardcias6dCommented
I think it is good that way, or at least not rought enough to do a rewrite, everybody needs some character development, specially kid Ben, well maybe tone down the emotion but the fight was good I think
You know what, last chapter was way too dramatic for no reason. And you know me, I don't like unnecessary drama. Especially not when I'm going with the lighthearted route with this story. I'mma rewrite last chapter into just a friendly spar instead of a dramatic scolding by a talking tiger lol. Here, have a realistic Rath pic has compensation: - Chardcias8dCommented"I'll have you know, any self-respecting gamer will choose to forsake valuable time if it means they end up stocking up on more loot... and I'm a true gamer at heart!"
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they nakey
"Why are you naked?" - Chardcias12dCommented
heeeeyyyy the ant eater, I liked that cartoon
[Viscosian Shurkez Description: Predator of both the Limax and Polymorph species. This species has cryokinesis and is able to release very low temperature freezing gas from its body —mainly its hands— that freeze its prey. It then shatters the ice statue and eats it. The ice parts thaw in its stomach and begin to dissolve.] - Chardcias13dCommented
hahahaha that's good man
{Well it means something like: House abandoned. Kiss my butt baldy ...} - Chardcias15dCommented
Grundy doing the big think
"Is very… close-minded. And… likely unproductive," Grundy agreed. "Complex problems… require complex… solutions. Forced oversimplification… is the bane… of reason and compromise." - Chardcias18dCommented
she*
"We call this the mass effect, and it lowers and decreases gravitational fields and its basis for many of our technological marvels.", Axela added, "But we can see that is not the case for the technology present here." - Chardcias19dCommented
Young master Victreebel?
Unfortunately, none of them found anything. He shouted even more, "Vic… Victreeee… Victreebel… Victreebel…" (Which bastards are attacking us? Everyone, keep an eye out. Establish a perimeter and inform me whenever you see anything move! I will dissolve those bastards in my acid!) - Chardcias19dCommented
it was pretty good honestly
This is the first chapter of this kind. I did not really like it, to be honest. The next chapter will be different. Something that I enjoy. - Chardcias19dCommentedScorch and I both let out a loud synchronous wheeze as we observe Davos having a small mental breakdown while literally being embraced by his patron deity. I knew Mephala wouldn't do anything to him as that wasn't her style but a small part of me did still feel bad 'I really should get that man something nice for all the trauma he gets from serving me.'
- Chardcias19dCommentedStill a bit out of it, Davos only nods and turns to leave before he stops moving altogether 'Little Davos?!' The short Dunmer's brain short circuits as his entire mind is overtaken by the memory of a certain night in the Blue Palace's mage tower "Oh no." He says with despair clear in his voice.
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very good so far, already have more exposure of other characters
[It's chapter 3 of the rewrite and I want to know what you guys think about it. Is it good or bad? Write it down in the comments.] - Chardcias19dCommented
she*
"This is not for you" Nana says pointing in the direction of the east tower "it's dangerous to go alone, so take this" she hands him the chocolate bar "give it to Chacha once you go to your room, SHE IS THERE WAITING… I am sure, this will stop her from pulling your head out" - Chardcias20dCommentedThe King opens his eyes wide at that statement "NO WOMAN, THAT SOUND GAY! I am not allowing it" declares the King in anger, the Queen erupts in a fit of laughter, Link sighs.
- Chardcias20dReplied to John_Khawhring[HEYOHHH! The rewrite fanfic is finally here and many things have changed, I swear. Mc will be more weaker than the previous fanfic protag but in exchange, there would be less OC's and will be able to cover the rest of the chosen worlds that weren't included in the previous fanfic.