Yeah, I just hate how it was spaced, I would see the space and expect something slightly different only to read basically the same thing.

This chapter was felt kinda sluggish and slow, with lots of repeating the same thing over and over, especially at the beginning where it basically says "Olivia's appearance didn't affect much" in like 5 different ways.

I haven't read this story, nor am I going to. I am just giving it a 4-star review because I am thankful that the author stated their lack of English skill in the description. Way too often have I found myself excited to try a story, only to get turned off by the grammar and sub-par English. So once again, thanks for not making me go through that author, and I wish you the best of luck.

Doesn't mean I can't still find it embarrassing.

Lol

Eh, the translation quality is actually pretty good, and like I said it seems generic, not good, not bad, so I went with a neutral review. Besides, I know some people like these kinds of stories, so I wanted to make it clear that it didn't seem too bad, it just wasn't for me. Besides, like I said I only read till chapter 5, and giving an extremely harsh review despite reading those few chapters when there are no extremely glaring problems, doesn't sit right with me.

I read to chapter five, and I can already tell that it's just a generic wish-fulfillment story. So far, we have gotten introduced to the main character, a random country bumpkin. He sees a cute girl on the train, and she ends up talking to him because she is nice. He then states that he will make lots of money, get multiple wives, and go to university because his village chief said to do so. He acts extremely arrogant about this, naturally frustrating the girl. Then he reads her palm and sees that they are "compatible" then he demands that she be his first wife. The girl didn't like this, and neither did two men near her. But what's this?! the men are dying? Good thing that the MC has the ability to cure anything using traditional Chinese medicine, which is lost to time, for no explained reason. He then tells them the only way he will treat them is if his "First Wife" tells him to. She reluctantly does so, then after he treats them in some ridiculous ways, the girl all of a sudden is in love with him, feeling jealous that he hadn't gotten her number yet. As I said, I can already tell this is generic wish fulfillment, so if you enjoy that you might like this.

The second-hand embarrassment is really too strong, it nearly killed me. Hopefully, it lessens later lol.

Tactical airstrike!

What a shitty situation.