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SetteXIII6hReplied to SPIRIT_KINGShe is, the sons and daughters of Athena are born just different.
"Well aren't you a natural, as expected of the daughter of the Goddess of Warfare… wow that was a lot of 'of' in one sentence.- SetteXIII18hCommented
Thanks for the chapter! Go go isekai collect powerfull itens and maybe even waifus, basically all the good ones on this world are already his, expect for Yuri, but the author for some reason leaved her alone, even tought she is the most usefull one.
Ch 58 The Greatest Explorer of All Time - SetteXIII30dCommentedCh 75 Chapter 75: Shinobu is Too Blunt
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Author thanks for the chapter, but you should take more attention to the fact that you are resuming the history to much, many instances that should be a dialogue are just resumed and it literally kills the flow of the history, If you don't want to write certain dialogues is better to just sumarize what happened without even put much effort on details, resuming dialogues like that just cheapen the impact on the history.
Ch 95 93. Trying To Save A Doomed Industry. (IV) - SetteXIII1mthCommented
And Natasha?
At this time, Alex was groaning inwardly as all his 'real' hosts, namely the two Gwens, MJ, Laura, Wanda, and Jane, were feeling the effects of his new acquisition. His soul also gained the tinge of yellow that was reminiscent of the Mind Stone forming a third layer over his soul following the red from Wanda's chaos and the green from the Time Stone. Following a similar procedure as before, the new Infinity Stone settled in the center of Alex's soul, right beside the Time Stone. - SetteXIII2mthCommented
The whole Dullahan debacle was pointless, Yu Long had already asked then to explain the situation to the Dullahan and even provided more essences spheres, as long as they had explained the battle probably won't even happen, all they did was to pointless anger him and caused the that of many people, including the Dullahan, all of it just because a forced plot for Huang Guan "desperado". Author could have done much better.
Ch 169 A Proposal to End the Night - SetteXIII2mthCommentedCh 71 Chapter 71: Bold Moves and Gentle Groans: Paizuri Edition
- SetteXIII2mthReplied to Skybreak619
This is a CN fanfic translated, this no doubt have been writed way before the revelation of Bonny age, so of course it will no taking account of recent revelations.
[Age: 22 years old] - SetteXIII3mthCommentedCh 31 Chapter 31: A Request
- SetteXIII3mthCommentedCh 60 Chapter 60: Ace vs Doma II
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Spirit*
"I heard a rumor that a peak Earth Profound Realm expert broke through to the Sky Profound Realm when eating on the sixth floor." - SetteXIII3mthCommented
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Example – "Would you kindly open the door for me?" can lead to "Would you kindly help me frame someone and send them to jail?" with enough time, subtlety and manipulation.] - SetteXIII3mthCommented
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Option 1: Rewrite the previous chapter with this new perk replacing the old one – Harem King's Privilege (HKP) will replace Harem King's Right. - SetteXIII3mthCommented
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Option 2. A bit of system shenanigans once in a while is okay. No need to change anything. - SetteXIII3mthCommented
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Option 2. Take your time building up the story so that we get to see Mark create his base in Japan in a more detailed manner.