need an editor to go through this FF

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awesome ff, I'm really enjoying it, but you should try to add in some breakups with the mc, so that some Canon can remain, like iris west should still be with barry...., and maybe limit the total that will be in the final harem.

harrypotter/ stargate sg1 crossover from the pov of harry potter.....plz

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Robert's rebellion

so rare to have a good fanfic, plz keep writing.

vanishing cabinet to hogwarts. time turner to save Hermione

Hermione

thor

I hope this fanfic continues, one of the good ones.

THE FIRST CHAPTER WAS GREAT, THE STORY OS GOOD OVERALL BUT IT NEEDS TO BE EDITED REAL BAD. PLEASE CONSIDER EDITING IT AGAIN.

needs 1 more go over from the editor

pretty good...... needs more chapters.......

I hope there is a sequel novel, because this ending sucked.....

THIS STORY NEEDS ONE BIG EDITING SESSION, THERE ARE A LOT OF MISUSED WORDS.

you should have made him older like 12,

besides that, good story so far...

these side comments, while amusing, cause the reader to fall out of the immersion of the story, because Ezra was never from earth, how would he know what a cowboy was or in previous chapter you brought up cell phones

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