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For later chapters, how does this impact battle mechanics? Wouldn't having a smaller qi core put your at a disadvantage?
Hey Author do you read over your chapters once you've finished writing them? I think a quick grammar check would help considerably with the flow of story.
This is a mouthful and difficult to understand. You might want to try rewriting this author.
Agreed, this is a level of description you don't see often in original works
Tbh I think its completely justified, putting this into context minimum wage makes you around 1200$ a month, so 700 gold coins loss is roughly $840000 which is pretty huge, though I would think Yuan Tu should take most of the blame. Also this is a cultivation novel so I'm assuming some strong cultivator (maybe mayor?) has a monopoly over all these spirit apples.
Thanks for the chapter author! Just my opinion, but maybe you should not do the ETA's for the chapters until you feel comfortable writing on a steady schedule again. Most of the readers here have experienced bumps in the updates before so we don't mind waiting a week or even more for a chapter, but putting unnecessary expectations that you won't be able to meet loads more pressure on yourself as well as giving readers false hope. As long as the quality doesn't drop I don't mind 1 chapter/week! Thanks again for the chapter and hope everything's going well!