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2. Strike the Blood with powers.- KarmaVivenciador1yrCommented
Se antes eu tinha duvida, agora eu tenho certeza.
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***Um Bael?*** Desconfiometro de o autor ser BR foi a 70% em...
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***Você?***, essa te entregou em amigo.
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Certeza que em quatro dias inventou a Fosfoetanolamina, a 'pílula do câncer'. kkkkkkk huehuehue
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Just be careful with the speed at which the other characters (that he helps) will evolve. Some users like that the MC has a kind of "talent above others or unique non-replicable talents" and that even his closest friends have talents always below him (and that they don't evolve so fast, as if they were geniuses in the style of xianxia ). I don't even need to talk about creating "rivals" right? (This thing that just by teaching a skill the person becomes extremely talented and can reach the development of the MC quickly)
Arjun repeatedly persuaded Sophia for few days, she also started to learn it, at first she didn't feel difference but after a month she experienced it and stopped complaining. Arjun started to wake up every morning, he started follow daily routine like meditation, exercise, magic training etc. Sophia followed his routine of meditation, he also started purifying her physical body and she had increase in her physical strength. After seeing results Arjun also started use purification magic on himself and he was also feeding magical energy to his body, as result his body gained muscles and it increased his physical strength. - KarmaVivenciador2yrCommented
Some users won't like it (because it's the button line of many people), due to the control of the ROB, very similar case of the same users who don't like talking systems (which have their own will and demand things from the user). But I respect your author choice. But I have a suggestion, instead of "quest" (demands under the threat of some kind of punishment from ROB & Co.) you can put it to "choose the next world" at the end of the harry potter saga.
( R.O.B. : well..... I had conversation with Administrator of Harry Potter Multiverse after sending you to his world, with suggestion I added Messenger as extra function to your basic system. with this I will be able to contact you if I have quest for you. Administrator also said that he could contact you in future as he also have some quest for you in future.) - KarmaVivenciador2yrCommented{ No, I am not king Yama, that's not my work..... I have deal for you, don't worry if you don't agree I will sent you back on path of samara.}
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Natsu é você?
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Type-Moon, Nasuverse.
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Esse erro de tradução te entregou em~~
Name: Bau de Sp's↓ - KarmaVivenciador2yrCommentedCh 21 End of story
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System conscious? Deal-breaker.
"I will make a system that will develop its conscience depending on what kind of person you want to become. If your way of doing things is more on using violence, then the system will develop a personality depending on that action so that it could provide you the necessary advice in achieving your goal, so, please bear that in mind," - KarmaVivenciador2yrCommented
Worm? Please NO!
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Can you stop the setting of "Pathetic MC" already? Getting hard to read, extremely annoying.
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