good story, interested to see where he is going to tie into cannon

Please do a fma fic

I always like, the WN that made there own houses in hogwarts, really added a mystery factor to the story.

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I really like how you have rewritten this. Right now, I undoubtedly believe this will turn out for the better, I completely believe that you made the write choice in this rewrite. Keep up the good work my guy. Try not to push yourself to hard, and continue to write what you love, not what you dread to write.

So I've been thinking for a long time on what his devil fruit could be, but here goes. 1. The Atles Empire A. The empire that hold up the sky B. The strongest empire in the other realm, that's tasked with trying to keep the demons out from other realms C. The empire were th Mc is the sword and the shield. 1a. The Mc comes from the family tasked with protecting the royal family. 2a. He is married to the next in line to the thrown, because his family always weds the first born male, to the first born female. 2. His most powerful weapon he should be, a pocket watch that seals his power on the lower plane he currently is. 3. His devil fruit should be the the Realm Realm no mi model: Guardian deity. A. Fruit that is inherented by his family. Hope this helps just a little bit, all of this was just what came to my head.

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I have been looking for a fmab fan-fiction, for the longest time. Keep up the good work. .

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Honestly I like how the story began, it just needs to focus on the Grammer. If you don't have someone to edit it, try going on grammer.ly or similar sites. This will make it easier for people to understand what is going on, and help improve imagery.

I agree. managed to drag me into the story, from chapter 1. Would really suck for the quality of it to drop.

21 days later, is there going to be a update anytime soon. or did you decide to drop this novel?

nice.

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Do what you think is best, for the novel to grow.