Swadek

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(As expected of me) => search this line and delete all !!!

Can you verify the name of people at least? Leo is everywhere for an exemple ...

Marquis Haldir is not the supreme elder. Edit the wrong name at least

The story is really good, profound background and good characters. But, too many inconsistencies and mistakes. A serious need of editing. Also, stop extending the explanations to simply make more chapters please.

Leon kidnapped? Its fine, lets joke and waste time, he's the MC after all. Seriously ...

Can you edit and add the "in", "his", "her", "she", he" missing along all the chapters? Pls

Bad translation Full of teen clichés But have potential if the story and background can be improved.

Pay for this? No thanks. Good story but the writing ... Where is the second great mage chp 81?

He was already a novice at the final fight of the competition ... Check your storyline ...