SmartudZ

interesting idea you got there[img=update]

the moment after reading this chapter, oi dude, that was KS right there. then when i go to comment section, im too late for it, lol

hmm... how about Ava the beast tamer girl that joined Rens group? or anyone else, like your new original character, for example, an innocent young elven girl / princess around 100 years old. there other races in the novels world, why choose a female human? kinda weird if it's an orc or dwarf.

something i dislike from this novel is the MC is actually racist. he destroyed Newyork as Pain with shinra tensei, he is ok to release any bijuu all around the world but he didn't want to touch China for any of his dangerous play. the MC reason, i realy hate it, it sound like the author is bootliking a chinese readers because Chinese readers doesn't want him to touch China.

hmm.. is it tensa zangetsu?

everyone just want the author to make ace survive the war, but i thinks it's necessary for him to die. the mc has the power of naruto world, bit he is too weak. reviving Ace is not impossible people. the author wanted to make the mc part of mugiwara's crew, so of course he will make the mc not be stronger than luffy. iff he is far more stronger than luffy, it's pointless to make him join strawhat pirate.

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The Hokage no longer exist, and he even literally callad himself a Kage. XD

sorry for the typo

inspired by japanese tshirt with a bad english word, like japanese wearing tshirt with "FUGLY", "dhiarea" on it, and they dont even know what it means. (source yt)