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SmartudZ

SmartudZ

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Lazy, Smart, and Handsome

2017-07-28 JoinedIndonesia
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ3mth
    Replied to Ashton_Clark

    the moment after reading this chapter, oi dude, that was KS right there. then when i go to comment section, im too late for it, lol

    Ch 413 Incident [5]
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ5mth
    Commented

    hmm... how about Ava the beast tamer girl that joined Rens group? or anyone else, like your new original character, for example, an innocent young elven girl / princess around 100 years old. there other races in the novels world, why choose a female human? kinda weird if it's an orc or dwarf.

    Ch 7 Let's Play a Game of Choose your love interest.
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ10mth
    Posted

    something i dislike from this novel is the MC is actually racist. he destroyed Newyork as Pain with shinra tensei, he is ok to release any bijuu all around the world but he didn't want to touch China for any of his dangerous play. the MC reason, i realy hate it, it sound like the author is bootliking a chinese readers because Chinese readers doesn't want him to touch China.

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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Commented

    hmm.. is it tensa zangetsu?

    Ch 107 106. Befriending The Beast
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Commented

    everyone just want the author to make ace survive the war, but i thinks it's necessary for him to die. the mc has the power of naruto world, bit he is too weak. reviving Ace is not impossible people. the author wanted to make the mc part of mugiwara's crew, so of course he will make the mc not be stronger than luffy. iff he is far more stronger than luffy, it's pointless to make him join strawhat pirate.

    Ch 96 95. The Great War 6
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to Luky_shark

    ??

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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to DragonslayerOfArk

    The Hokage no longer exist, and he even literally callad himself a Kage. XD

    Ch 10 New School
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to Deatlord

    sorry for the typo

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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to Knights_Errant

    inspired by japanese tshirt with a bad english word, like japanese wearing tshirt with "FUGLY", "dhiarea" on it, and they dont even know what it means. (source yt)

    "Everyone stay on thir ground! dont move! this is an attack, we are TITS Organization!" one of a terrorist member announced with a headset on on the stage.
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to

    kinda like a crying emoticon wit 2 capital Ts, maybe they are craying because you're laughing about their org name XD

    "Everyone stay on thir ground! dont move! this is an attack, we are TITS Organization!" one of a terrorist member announced with a headset on on the stage.
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to Knights_Errant

    its not about chakra, i mean it like some physical and mental burdens directly to his body

    "how can that whiskers boy did so many, he got a huge Chakra, but its after effects?"
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to Knights_Errant

    i love the Japanese for his casting, but ill use english for the jutsu names, its seems fun for me, i write for fun, sorry

    Kawarimi no jutsu (Substitution technique), Bunshin no jutsu (Clon technique), Henge no jutse (Transformation technique) and Sunshin no Jutsu (Body flicker technique)
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to Knights_Errant

    sure, but itll be too fast for an early chapter

    for Taijutsu i can train with villagers that are actually loved Ninjas and martial arts too, like my dad or my neighbors, well i need to hold myself to not hurt them.
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to CliffkunLolRekt

    The harem was out off context of the story they made, its kinda like watching too much filler, because of that sometimes reading a harem fanfic got me annoyed, and made me more confused, its that adults moment or the story it self were the fillers, wichone? So iff i really wanted to read a harem fic, then i did like it be used on on a perfect phase, not having a sex every now and then like eating breads did u need to tell a story that they told you they are eating bread everytime they eat bread? There is no romance in that, just a sex addict playboy focused story that have other seasoning in it to make it good but it was really suck.

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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to CliffkunLolRekt

    The harem was out off context of the story they made, its kinda like watching too much filler, because of that sometimes reading a harem fanfic got me annoyed, and made me more confused, its that adults moment or the story it self were the fillers, wichone? So iff i really wanted to read a harem fic, then i did like it be used on on a perfect phase, not having a sex every now and then like eating breads did u need to tell a story that they told you they are eating bread everytime they eat bread? There is no romance in that, just a sex addict playboy focused story that have other seasoning in it to make it good but it was really suck.

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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to CliffkunLolRekt

    No harem, before i liked to read it, this time so many of the harem stories disgusted me.

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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Replied to amaturewriter

    I wanna use it, but the time was not right, its realy hard to train secretly, and a he have an annoying school, and he rarely have a time for intense physical training, ill make him train more during his highschool years because he will live alone in the city, so maybe later

    Ch 1 Sato Arima
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  • SmartudZ
    SmartudZ1yr
    Posted

    Hello im the author, actually i have no confidence in my story or my English so..... I think it will be interesting iff someone just reincarnated in his favorite anime world but too far in the future of that world. No system, because the era is too peaceful. harem? I realy hate the idea of harem. Harem writen by inexperienced writer, sometimes its kinda feel too forced and seems unnatural

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