is he not gonna use his simulator to find any traps spies or anything like that. did author forget the system he added?

the world is a mess and a mumbo jumbo of different universes. peter with spider + venom somehow weaker than og peter. Yuri harem like seriously? don't bother wasting time reading this unless u like soyboy mc.

did Eddie need power growth when he first got venom? no he was strong. this piss weak Peter is weaker than og spiderman. L story writing and power scaling.

was that a jhin reference

I know this is a fan fiction but how can he not have any karma points if his first wish is for his family. with that kind of mindset there would be no way he didn't do good in his life

I meant mc*

honestly the mmc was a normal person in modern society, u can't just have her kill people even if they are trash of society and the fact that she prepare for long range killing straight away. not saying story is bad but character development could be better, but I lots a fanfictifanfiction so I'll just keep reading for now

please consider dropping momo for a fate character or an oc, she is just so overused in mha fan fictions and imo very boring with the massive power differences.

what makes this story so much better is the fact that my name is also Leo so i can pretend im the mc LOL

it was said he made an up to date version of the story with Arc a while ago so.

iirc it was stated the guy read up to where yun che was about to leave for the god realm. but it also said he later used arc to make an update to date copy of the story to read so idk.

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mine says my stock has been cleared out i wont be posting for a while.

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oh this is getting interesting

more and more cliffhangers sjowing up, stop it F:

I thought saitama would be better than one punch man. Like people would be like its the hero Saitama than its the hero one punch man. Just feels like ilikets more smooth but just my opinion.