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Hi, do you by some chance have any info on what happened to author of death devotion dissonance?
just kill him nothing of value would be lost, dumb fckr
"I don't plan on becoming your slave. You should let me go. Whatever it is you are planning, I don't have anything to offer." things like this make me want to close novel and never think about it anymore. I don't plan on becoming your slave? how fukin dumb, entitled and immature you are? like fckn MC do you even know what's word 'slave' mean?
Well with all this messed they/their/etc when I saw some random comments about finishing school or smtn it was like sudden enlightenment, but looks like I was wrong. Actually it makes everything really much worse. There's some complete nonsense in your story: 1. Everyone on Earth compulsory drafted at 16+ yet all we have is 8?11? bases with 2000 students per base? what? Hope I just skipped part that explained it. 2. One of the most powerful(influential) humans in this world almost died to bunch of kids because he has no protection(super advanced tech everywhere btw) except for his bodyguards? Actually all this situation/plot/arc with truedream is just beyond me, couldn't read past this. Hope you will put more thought into your next work.
Well just to be clear - author put a lot of effort into writing, anyone can see it, so I don't understand what's the need to shoot oneself in the foot. Like why even put so much effort into this development(Phloria/Kamila/Solus)? Is this interesting, satisfying, enjoyable, entertaining or even realistic? No it's boring, frustrating and kinda ruin otherwise good story not just because it's 'exist' but because it's stretching out for 500 chapters already (started by 400 and ongoing by 900). Kill them, marry them to pig fat nobles, make them betrayers etc. anything. just put readers out of this misery. plz.
I started this novel and gave up by chapter3. Insurances and welfares after 'nuclear' power destroyed half of humanity? lmfao (actually if only all capitals were destroyed there shouldn't be nowhere near that much casualties). AI managed cars but there's still 'old fashioned' cars without even primitive AI to prevent crashes? lmfao. 100y in the future new-tech and all, and still no AI management for human resources? no population control, no division on classes/specialties/etc. Ridiculous. Most of the ppl live in radioactive lands and take iodine to prevent illness? Done. Maybe I will give it another chance when I have nothing to read, but when first chapters of 'sci-fi' is this bad thought throught it's really not a good sign.