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ridiculous11mthReplied to LemonZawodowiecSpace magic saves lives
She had seized the opportunity when Siri had begun to monologue and had launched herself from the top of the ship. With her jetpack providing some extra thrust, she had travelled at high speed straight towards the jedi before delivering a savage elbow to the woman's nose.- ridiculous1yrCommentedCh 1284 Interception
- ridiculous1yrCommentedCh 37 Chapter 36
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I truly love this book you've started, it's my favorite in a very, very long time. I can't quite find the word to praise your writing and describe my enjoyment of it, but if it were food...drool would be leaking all down my chin! I've never really written a review in all my years (6 ish) on webnovel but for you I'm going to give it a go! *Writing Quality* I find the quality to be truly top notch. No spelling or grammatical errors jumped out at me and the flow of the story has been smooth and uninterrupted. Conversations between characters are natural and immerse you into the world that's being created. Inner thoughts, monologs, and settings are all easily differentiated so no confusion on who or what is talking. Admittedly, we're only 15 chapters in at this point, each chapter is quite large however so im confident the quality will remain. *Story Development* The novel has introduced background information and world building without becoming boring or going too deep into minutiea. Basically, no Goku charging his spirit bomb for 8 chapters haha. In my opinion there's a healthy balance of action, character building, and slice of life. The romance is being built up well, as in two people actually getting to know each other and bonding/crushing on each other. Although it hasn't really made it to that point yet. Outside the main leads the supporting characters are well done and make it so the story isn't empty. Everyone seems to add something to the story and it really comes together well. *Character design* Character descriptions let you picture what people in the novel look like and what they're feeling too. I haven't noticed and cookie cutter type ones thrown in. *Udpating Stability* Well, I wish there were more chapters but since I really love this book no matter how many there were I'd want more... That said the updates are fairly slow but steady. I have no complaints due to the fact that chapters keep coming. I'm willing to wait for awesomeness *World Background* I think I already talked about this in the other ones. So I'm gonna skip it. AUTHOR KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!! I support you 100%, I'll legit be a cheerleader and sing you motivational songs with pom poms and everything to keep you going haha
- ridiculous2yrReplied to _Alenkar
I love this video
"I remember how a certain naughty cat made fun of me because of my condition, but now that it has been solved, I'd say she deserves a punishment, wouldn't you say?" - ridiculous2yrCommented
bro stop posting other books in this one. I came here to read this book, if I wanted to find a new one I'd do so -_-
This chapter has been deleted. - ridiculous2yrReplied to Lord_Tobi
I want
(E/D: Since Ayame is from Senba Academy, she would have known of Raiden Mei. And since they would soon meet each other, and with how close Ayame is to Kouro, Mei would inevitably feel jealous, much less the Herrscher inside of her, Herrscher Mei would probably want to cut Ayame into pieces and throw lightning bolts inside Mei while Mei would still retain her elegant smile outside, and rant inside her mind. What's your opinion about this?) - ridiculous2yrReplied to Elder
I wish to report mental abuse!!!!!!
(E/D: I want to say 'Riajuu, explode!', but I'm semi-apathetic and couldn't relate to people saying that, I just know that singles say that to couples flirting.) - ridiculous2yrCommented
Ironic considering him making himself and family Immortal...
Life could not be denied its emotions, death had its place, and rejecting or focusing on a few aspects while ignoring others was simply denying reality and oneself. Becoming a complete being and guardian of the Force demanded embracing it all. - ridiculous2yrCommented
You're well on your way to becoming a professional mover! Good luck, I'll be eagerly awaiting updates 😊
Author Note: Apologies on the delay, a close friend of mine had a situation that required needing to move ASAP. I got roped into assisting them move out of their apartment, and have been busy with that. As a side note, I won't be releasing chapters next week either. I will be out of state helping my Aunt move out of California. - ridiculous2yrCommented
Now THAT'S a cult I'd join. 10,000% Then summarily dump my life savings into! We need more cults with real long term causes. #Burn #WithFireComesCleansing
3. Some people just wanted to see the world burn. - ridiculous2yrCommented
how the hell could he bend over if his ribs are fused together?!?!
During this time the rib cage will fuse into a solid mass of bullet-proof, interlaced bone plates. - ridiculous2yrReplied to RuberDF
I'm terrified, disgusted, and yet I can't stop watching as my eyes bleed....
"Thank you for the meal." - ridiculous2yrCommentedCh 6 Chapter 6: Ye Jingyi is moved
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My poor kitties :(
Buildings... Men... Women... Children... Dogs... Cats... - ridiculous2yrCommented
I would literally kill for more megaman legends -_-
"I can, but those worlds are very limited in terms of strength. The former I mentioned fits and runs parallel with my world's strength, power, and growth. The other games like those you mentioned and the likes of Digimon 1 and 2, and Megaman Legends, they cannot support you in that world! The way those worlds are designed is not suited for you to grow in strength and power."