IdiotRick

@Tanginaniyo What you said is true about most fanfiction on fanfiction -net, Naruto though is an exception, most of the top fics there are OC or SI novels. The community is also way larger than webnovel.

PS, i don't think the novel is that slow paced, some of the best Naruto fanfic i've read are way slower paced, like 250k words and MC is just starting the academy.

I like that your story is not just a source material rehash, i am exited to see how it will be handled later on. I like that the humor in the novel is grounded (pun intended) and to me feels natural. I like that you have actual dialogue between characters and not just another MC with an inner monologue. I like your OC characters, so far they fit well into the setting.

tyftc.

This is a fun story and concept.I am however dropping the story as of chapter 90.My main complaints are: 1. MC too OP too fast.2. as of chapter 90 it's still week 2 of the first year.3. Casual bashing of characters (imo), especially Ron, Hermoine and Dumbledore.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

This is great! Writing Quality: No typo's as far as I have read, the prose is good I've not been confused once so far. There are some info dumps but those are essential for world building. Story Develpment: The author clearly has a plan for the plot, so far the story is cohesive. Character Design: The cast so far is pretty small, we get time to spend with characters before new ones are introduced which is something I adore. Updating Stability: As of the chapter I'm reading 4 chapters per week, which is phenominal with the writing quality. World Background: Future Earth space age, I've not read far enough for anything else.

Writing Quality 4/5: Good word diversisty and well structured sentences, the reader won't struggle here. There are however a few minor typo's every few chapter that are probably due to autocorrect. I.E: Brian becomes brain. Story Development 4.5/5: The story focuses Mc's inventions/discoveries used for the betterment of others, be it individuals or entire communities. Something I'd like more of is POV's from different characters it's one thing to see the improvements of the Burtons via the MC another entirely from the POV of say a guard. Character Design 4/5: The MC is too OP... Well that is sort of the point but I think I'd enjoy the story more if the MC had to work together with say Ceasar to perfect the manuals for the major heavenly laws. In the end it feels as if other major characters in the story can never measure up to the MC. Updating Stability 5/5: Seems to update frequently, I just binged nearly 300 chapters so I'll just leave 5/5. World Background 4.5/5: Starts out as pretty standard xinxia fare I.E: eight kingdoms, 4 empires multiple planets. While you read the story however the book/novel takes the time to introduce dukes and the royal family from both the Mc's kingdom and foreign kingdoms.

Typo: portion Should be: potion

Typo: really do this Should be: really did this