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  • NoMine
    NoMine4 months ago
    Replied to Daoistpwd2z5

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  • NoMine
    NoMine2 years ago
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    Anyone thinking this chapter is deep is a brainlet. I know feeling disgust at this detailed gory description is hypocritical in nature, I'm a human. We're hard-wired to protect women because their value in the survival of our species is almost infinitely higher than for men. The entire message is maybe a revelation for some who never had a deep thought in their life, but for others it feels extremely forced and unneccesary. And for people saying MC only does things for his own sake and isn't inherently evil, there was no reason at all to wake the girl up and terrify her before killing her. It seems more like he gained some twisted pleasure from her squirming in her restraints, I at least can't think of any other reason for not just killing her while unconscious. I guess I'll keep reading untill the first book is done and make a decision then, but it's not looking good. I care about characters and relationships the most in stories, this novel sucks in that aspect.

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    NoMine4 years ago
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    Really great story, enjoyable and well-written characters and intriguing magic-system. I feel like the story, character interactions and romantic relationships got worse during the second half of what is written so far, but I'm hoping and believeing it (especially the romance) will get better after the recent arc-shift. Slight spoiler about romantic relationships; I feel like the author is into ntr. And I'm very much not. The writing quality and occasional mistake in names and earlier happenings draws it down a little bit, and that's the weakest point of the novel for me. Some proofreading or an editor going through everything before the chapters are posted would help a lot.