The spacing change in the name is so painful

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Be quiet

Beam of Solarium

Wrath of Solis, Eye of Solis, Lights vengeance, Lights wrath, Supreme beam, Supreme light, Beam of hope, Ray of hope, A call to Solis, A prayer to Solis, Pure light beam, Protection of Solis, Ray of Solis, Beam of Solis. Maybe something casual like “Saving Grace”. Maybe make the prayer special and call it “A prayer to Solis”. And after he is done praying he shoots out the “Supreme light beam”.

Could have fleshed out the appearance of the mc in chapter one, very confusing as I have no clue what he looks like, or what his age is. Either way keep it up [img=recommend]

The pace is very confusing, I don’t know where the plot is going and the sudden switches in time are out of place. I’ll continue reading for now though as I think you have an interesting way of writing. Keep it up.

50kg? Sus

Isn’t she like 7?

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Bobba

Perfect book in my eyes, but honestly, in which authors eyes is their first book not a masterpiece? Seriously now, this book is about a middleaged man named Ralph reincarnating into a parrallel world after being betrayed by his brothers-in-arms. Ralph gets to meet god and take 1 thing from his previous world with him, he brings a precious book, which is a collection of things he wrote while being an “Emperor”. He starts from scratch in a babies body and starts building his own army. Divising schemes and making plans to conquer the world, Will he rise to the top?

Shouldn’t he be able to buy herbs from the system? Thanks for the chapter :)

Don’t like the main character, prefer the teacher.

Hey guys! Author here. I will be honest with this novel, It's my very first and I've put quite a lot of time in thinking about the plot of the novel. So the plot revolves around Alfred who after a traumatizing incident, full of hate is for the Demon species. His potential is unleashed and after a lot of hard work he becomes one of the pillars of humanity. With the help of his 4 colleagues and his dragon, he forces the Demon King back into the demon realm, however, he had to use a forbidden secret skill which lowered his lifespan to just 20 days. He decides he will do all for humanity and roams the battlefield killing monsters and stray demons. However, a human Commander notices his weakened state and sets up a trap to kill him with the help of demon Commanders, After he dies, he gets reincarnated into a boy with almost identical looks as him, and with the same name. Alfred notices only 10 days have passed since his former death. So he plots and vows to kill the human Commander and the rest of the Demon race. So the main plot is after he reincarnated. As for Alfred himself, he has lived on the battlefield for almost his whole life, so he is calm and collected. On top of that he also had a lot of authority in the military and the world itself. I won't be giving this story a 5 star review as I don't think it deserves it. I've read a lot of novels so I believe my judgement on this work is spot-on.

The more you read the better it gets. The mc goes back in time with a system which gives points based on the amount of him contributing to society, which will face almost certain doom in the near future. There is little to no face slapping, instead, the mc focuses on the strength of the city and helps his peers by teaching them fighting arts from the future. Very good novel, 9/10

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