denwell

The idea is good but everyone is behaving like a young master, its simply ridiculous [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap]

The story started interesting but a it progresses the main character slowly disappears into the background in there are dozens of continuous chapters where he is not even mentioned

this is just a re-post of Earl of the North By: Lord Silvere which is a free and already completed story on fanfiction.com https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2208427/1/Earl-of-the-North

please no harem

[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted] This is just a re post of Bokuboy work https://www.scribblehub.com/series/502255/self-insert-as-spiderman-mcu/

this is plagiarized version of (In this World and the Next) by RobST https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5627314/1/In-this-World-and-the-Next https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1451358/RobSt

The pace is too slow and seriously wood release without being able to use it. whats the point?. A ninja that cant use jutsus is like a eunuch with a harem

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola