Lorepheus
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Hello Dear Readers! This is a review that will give you, my readers, some insight into what to expect when reading this novel. To see if this will appeal to your tastes. Pros: 1. I tend to write 2000-4000 words for each chapter by using a clear and concise word structure to help you visualize the scenes as best as possible. So consider each chapter as 2-3 worths of an original WebNovel. 2. Everything in the novel, including the author's notes, isn't without purpose as it will contribute to The End. Even you, my readers, will have an influence on it. 3. The protagonist has flaws but isn't unbearable so that there is room for development in the later chapters. Cons: 1. There are some cliches and inspirations from other sources since, like you, I was a reader before I was aspired to become an author. Just for one story. 2. I am writing this by myself in my free time so the releases will vary depending on my IRL job and health. 3. There will be 3-4 arcs/stages to this novel. At the time of this writing, we're currently in arc 1. So this novel is currently in its infancy. Further details and updates will follow, I hope that you enjoy the story! -The Author ◦°˚\(*❛ ‿ ❛)/˚°◦
You're very welcome, my dear reader, and there's nothing to apologize for! I understand where you're coming from and welcome any feedback you could bring (so long as they're progressive) since I feel that you have a discerning eye. Also, if you have any other questions, feel free to ask and I'll answer as best I can. Without any spoilers, of course. Thank you and have a good day! (๑ˊ͈ ॢꇴ ˋ͈) ᵃʳⁱᵍᵃᵗᵒ〜♡॰ॱ
Hello reader! Good eye, several of the beginning parts are heavily inspired by 'The Second Coming of Gluttony.' Just like how George Lucas was inspired by Akira Kurosawa, Arthurian Legend, and Dune, so too will this novel be a mixture of several inspirations, imaginations, and ideas. ( ̄▽ ̄)
It's a pretty interesting read. It's set in a sci-fi world filled with cutting-edge technology centered around the character, Nancy Morgan. It has had an active development since the beginning with Chapter 1, as the author stated, the MC is written to be hated in the beginning. I would recommend this novel if you're interested in a story filled with development in both character and story.
Poor Orpheus. .·´¯`(>▂<)´¯` ·.
I agree, the people of the past had to look up in search of inspiration and connection. Nowadays, people look down on their phones or forward at what's in front of them. d(‘-’*)b
He probably got rejected. That's why he killed Reverie. (っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ
An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind. (ง◍ω◎)ง
Run MC, RUN! ┏( ゜) ਊ゜)┛
I'm glad she's okay, but now begins her journey! (۶•̀ᴗ•́)۶ It was an interesting read and I enjoy how descriptive you were with your setting. Her connection to the dream seems like it'll be an interesting read. The only criticism that I can give is to see if you can correct your grammar by using a program that checks for grammar. ʃ(⌣́,⌣́)ƪ
Oh no, I hope she'll be okay! ◉Д◉
Wow, I'm not a cat owner but the way you were descriptive here introduces the bond between the two. ლ(●ↀωↀ●)ლ
I 'love' the mystery there! ( + ・`ω・)b