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  • zarnex
    zarnex3yr
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    I'm up to chapter 300. I was just trying to get across that the more wives that are added the Less time per chapter there is to develop the story and the characters that are already in the story. because of this alot of the wives do not have proper personalities, there is no character development for them. all they do is train or sleep with the main character. The story has been over saturated with supposedly important characters to the point that the story is suffering.

    altalt
    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • zarnex
    zarnex3yr
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    the story is okay, but later on in the story it all starts going downhill. the main character gets like 20 wife's and 6 kids, your supposed remember all their names what they look like. they become very 2D characters because there is not enough time in a chapter to give each character a proper personality. there is so many of them now that there isn't enough time in the chapters to say what every wife is doing. for example the squirrel wife and the wife with the eyes, you barely hear about the after the join the harem.

    altalt
    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • zarnex
    zarnex3yr
    Commented

    who is jonete?

    Alice played around with Jonete and was currently still learning her new powers, Jonete was about to reach max level, so she wanted to bring her to the dungeon and level up.
    altalt
    Epic of Caterpillar
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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