Quadan

that's one ugly Dean Winchester

Will the rest of the story contain this much romance usually ?

Every time they talk about Empire Astartes keep talking about survival, mortal threats but nobody asks Who is your enemy. It's breaking all immersion and making every character look like idiots.

Aragorn should be a baby or maybe not even born during the Fall of Smaug. So there shouldn't be a beloved for Arwen, yet.

Tbh your novel looks like an adaptation from Chinese translation at the first look but if you dig a little deeper and make some searches you will find out it's an original work with heavy inspiration from multiple entertainment type novels. I quite enjoy reading it.

I am a bit confused, is he a reincarnated person or this HP universe contains I Cast as a muggle fiction.

Dropped too much senseless drama . The entire robbery arc was stupid Even the 2K era had a bunch of security measures yet somehow on 40K he thought the whole Warehouse was unsecured. I thought maybe the author could pull the story together somehow but it's getting worse.

https://uukanshu.cc/book/12152/

While the story is above average, writing needs heavy editing.

I was expecting pure swordsmanship maybe a one piece level psychical strength with training.