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Quadan8dCommentedI was expecting pure swordsmanship maybe a one piece level psychical strength with training.
.<br/>------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------<br/>MC POV:<br/>It was unexpected to say the least. Never would I have expected to join Truck kun's legion of crossers as unlikely as it seems. I have been drifting in this darkness for a while now and nothing is going on just silence, I am alone with my thoughts for a long time that's dangerous I hope I don't start spiraling into depravity. <br/><br/>Nah probably not, its not like a was completely sane anyway, when I was alive I was an MMA fighter trying to work my way into the big show so I can start making some bank but no one tells you how tough it is to get noticed by the UFC so I started working some jobs on the side to help pay the bills. <br/><br/>Everything went south when I was hired by some Bulgarian mafia boss to be his personal bodyguard, the pay was good heck I didn't need to fight professionally anymore so I retired (I was twenty six around this period). <br/>I had some time to myself so I got hooked on anime and some series, I started watching one piece from the jump I have to say Luffy and his friends really grew on me. <br/><br/>Watching their adventures and how much they went through to achieve their dreams really put a lot in perspective for me but I still say that Oda the infuriating genius created quite possibly the coolest character ever in Dracule Mihawk and completely underutilized him. Like so twenty years have gone by and I still remember when Mihawk and Zoro fought, was that not the coolest thing you have ever seen on television I'm telling you we needed more Mihawk content but nope Oda starved us. <br/><br/>The world's strongest swordsman and he was so underutilized a tragedy I tell you. Anyway I was forty eight when I finally retired over the years I had a wife and kids and I ,made enough money and I was done with that life. I guess it wasn't done with me. Over the years I became a well known with that comes perks and disadvantages. On my fifty sixth birthday my family was attacked by a rival gang, wife and kids kidnapped and held in a hostile location.<br/><br/> I was livid so I went to the place and fought my way in. The gunshots attracted police and the building was surrounded finally the boss of the gang made a deal with me they would release my family to the police in exchange I'll stand down and die. <br/><br/>I agreed cause they are the most important part of my life, I'm already old I've seen the ugly side of this world and if I am still here they would never be safe so I bet my life on the new generation ( is that a shanks reference??lol) after I saw them with police I activated the bomb I strapped unto my body when I came. Blew the place up and all of us in there died how's that for an exit.<br/>I feel I've been drifting in this place for a long time now when is it going to end…<br/><br/>'How are you still alive mortal?' said voice that sounded like it was coming from every direction.<br/><br/>I looked around until I saw a white celestial body, it had human features but no face. It was faceless no eyes ,no nose , nothing. Kinda looked like Truth from FMAB. <br/><br/>'I'm not gonna lie. I am as confused as you. been here for a while now' said the mc trying to look as calm as possible. He could feel it wouldn't take a look for this being to wipe him out of existence.<br/><br/>'Your misfortune turned into luck. You have been in the void for 20000 years. This is not where beings of your level should be. Maybe there was a mistake in your transendence cycle.' the R.O.B muttered to himself but I managed to pick up on it.<br/><br/>`Can you please help me? I don't want to be here alone anymore. and what do you mean luck?' I asked cause how can being alone for that long be luck?<br/><br/>`The Void is where beings such as myself reside. You as a human should be wiped out the moment you stepped in here talk less of surviving this long. I like your perseverance and I'll help you reincarnate into another world different from your earth. I'll go through your memories and pick one now then allow you ask for 4 wishes. I won't make you a god get your head out of you ass.' the R.O.B said. <br/><br/>Fair enough to me. I even get 4 wishes instead of 3 like those fan fictions lemme think and plan what I want.<br/><br/>`Okay I decided you will go to Planetos. I believe the series is called Game of Thrones. Now you state your wishes. If it I don't like it I'll dismiss it.'<br/><br/>`For my first wish I wish to be reincarnated as Dracule Mihawk with all his swordsmanship and haki.' I asked hoping for the best<br/><br/>`Granted but it would come with the body from people from Planetos. This wish basically makes this an AU. So people can learn haki and there are devil fruits but also magic still.<br/><br/>`I wish to have the Zushi Zushi no mi. Controlling gravity would be cool and I'll be able to fight the dragons in that world.' I said as I stated my second request.<br/><br/>` Granted. I'll remove the devil fruit curse too. but to make this more fun I'll add a random amount of devifruits in your world. To give you a bit of a challenge. It would be the Ice-Ice fruit, mera mera no mi, woods-woods fruit, teleport fruit, gold fruit, shock fruit, tori tori no mi, mythical zoan Fenrir fruit and mythical zoan Jormungandr fruit these are ones that have already been found before. The Jormungandr fruit has already been eaten hundreds of years before when you get there by a kraken and is what the ironborn worship as the drowned god. Zoans and logia can be harmed by Valyrian steel and hakialso.' the ROB replied.<br/><br/>I see. So I would be seen as entertainment for this god. Don't worry I aim to please.<br/><br/>`I wish for an A.I. Supersmart around brainiac's level and comes with parallel processing and us completely loyal to me and it comes with an inventory about the size of Alabasta.<br/><br/>`Granted. <br/><br/>`And finally I wish for complete ice immunity. Can't feel cold and the night walkers can't harm me with their ice magic.'<br/><br/>`DENIED. I'll give you ice resistance so you can't feel the cold or get frost bitten but thats it. The Night king can still harm you. I forgot to add before because of your stay in the void you were granted a few gifts. Eidetic memory, your soul is effectively immortal so when your body dies you can choose to cultivate immortality or reincarnate again and you can read minds. Now have a good time in Westeros Dra… what's your name again?'<br/><br/>`I was known as Joshua Connors in my past life. In my next I will be called Mihawk.'<br/><br/>`Sure. I'll be watching Mihawk. Now LEAVE!'<br/><br/>and everything went dark.</p>- Quadan24dReplied to Eromobor_Onobun
- Quadan1mthReplied to Captain_Friendly[Image]
- Quadan1mthReplied to DeathOfDeath
Then quite a lot of Isekai novels would have ended in chapter 1.
"I truly am sorry about this. I took this time to directly apologize to you alright? But what's been done can't be done. It is a fact that you have died, regardless of it being my mistake or not. That is why I brought you into this space instead of letting your soul directly pass on into heaven.", The old man answered in a polite tone. - Quadan2mthCommentedThis book has been deleted.
- Quadan3mthCommentedCh 18 the Path of Control
- Quadan9mthReplied to _hallow_killer_
Only Five gacha, god refused gacha system and if he decided to abandon human body all of them becomes null and void
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Writer created a walking mc instead of crippled one even their inner turmoil are same. As a wish he chose to be reborn as RDA officials son then he goes depressed because he doesn't want be betray pandorans. So question is why reborn as a human then if this was supposed to represent inner turmoil, Jake already does that what is the point. Whole story feels like written without any general direction. I am done reading this.
This book has been deleted. - Quadan10mthReplied to RagingDebtColektor
- Quadan10mthCommented
From using single words to have conversations to whole sentences. Transition felt to fast literally in 1 chapter, made feel like MC got changed. While I understand the usage of time skip, ıt felt like character progression skip as well. Other than that nice work overall.
Ch 27 Ch. 27 Time skip - Quadan1yrCommentedCh 4 No Title
- Quadan1yrCommentedCh 34 Playing stupid games
- Quadan1yrCommentedCh 88 Chapter 81: Filler??? (Part 2)
- Quadan1yrReplied to Omen_of_Oblivion
Correct word should be "thou" actually too doesn't make any sense in sentence.
I nodded as this was okay,GOD continued"The second wish is also grant able as you would need the knowledge and weapons to counter the supernatural beings in this world,you would be able to teleport that whole building to where you desire.The 3rd wish is also easy." Creator then waved his hands and said"But the last wish is a bit tricky,but still granted.The mirror use will be changed to - Quadan1yrReplied to AuthoriTet
You can't get a contract for FF at least not one that can make writer or publisher earn a direct income from published work. It might be possible to get some sort of round about contract for writers to earn money thorough some fake original novel so you can tie down the writer but it doesn't make much sense for webnovel. Might be possible at China but I highly doubt it.
- Quadan1yrCommentedCh 48 Chapter 46 Machine
- Quadan1yrCommented
While what you are writing wasn't perfect your growing was easily observed. From what I see you are making a very common mistake of new writers instead of finishing your story with a slow but steady growth curve, you decided to rewrite. Problem here you will get stuck again in rewrite because your growth is only at level where you drop at first attempt. Instead of rewrite you should finish this story slowly while perfecting your craft overtime then write a new story about same topic or a different one.
Ch 1 Reworking:(