Well, let's say I struck gold. The novel presents a great theme, with an excellent and rich world-building, in addition to an intelligent MC, and yes this is rare, and in addition to having an excellent power system. The secondary characters are a little lackluster in comparison, with the exception of 5 or 6. Which you'll have to read to find out. Okay, I'll give you a spoiler, one of them is the main villain who makes the plot turn.

Why are you paying so much attention to Isabel? Wasn't the story #NO-HAREM? Well you know what you're doing. For me she continues to be an irritating character, perhaps over time I will change my opinion about her.

I wouldn't say the worst, after all there are many works that did much worse with time skipping, but it could be done better, like the "mana usage" skill, it should have already become an advanced skill... even if the advanced skill was at level 2 Her levels have stagnated, I hope you don't turn this back against her, but she has a huge repertoire of skills, and her level is far from being an indication of her strength. I just hope that that 'apple' skill has evolved or that its xp is: level 9 430000/450000. This would at least show that she made an 'apple' a day

I still don't see her point in wanting to protect this r*pist and murderer, is it wanting to say that revenge was empty, that disgusting moralistic talk? The only thing I didn't like about this arc. I really liked the fights, the curse even being used to affect souls. I know it's boring to say this, but congratulations on the book.

wrong, being average is the ideal way to hide your powers, being below average is just an annoying decoy that will be used as a hook for a simple slap-in-the-face plot. After all, if he were a b or c rank, he would be just another person in the crowd. For me, it would be even more interesting if the machine showed that he was someone normal, without powers. If you still have this novel in the library, was it worth reading? Will there be an annoying slap-in-the-face plot? I would appreciate it if you answered me. I'm going to put this novel on the fridge while I wait for a response.

is that everything is 8 or 80, or they are super mega overpower, or they pretend to be super mega weak, I think it's all a matter of how it's done.

I know it could be a spoiler, answer if you want, is his lineage being nerfed by the system? After all, Fenix are known for their vitality. Another thing about power levels, he is at level 2/7, while the "mc" is at 5/16, he is technically stronger than our mc, but the difference is not that much, it would be better to say that he is the " mc" original game has much more strength than an average person at level 5/16.

Writing Quality ***** very good Stability of Updates ***** very good Story Development ** disappointing Character Design * bad World Background **** good I gave low marks because of a golden rule that I follow very diligently, I don't read anything when the main character has sentient clones. I'm disgusted by this. I was flustered by the time invested, and with the note that it ended for "me", I really liked the more positive theme of the book, and I was very flustered that it ended in a depressing way for "me".

Doubt it, the artifact will only protect up to "Emperor" rank, and would only teleport it to its mother if it was a "Surpreme". So I didn't understand why he was sent to his mother.

well, for the sake of maintaining the suspension of disbelief, i'm going to believe that he in the many fights he's had, hit his head hard enough, or even had some claw pierced his skull, because that's easier to believe than for him to "forget, because all that matters is was to survive."

sad to only give 1 stars but his word reigns. Thank you for writing this story, I look forward to new chapters, unfortunately I read them all in 4 days, I hope the love interests don't cause too much drama, although I love them and I still have a little hope that this romance will continue, although I understand and support in case you want to do something more "realistic" after all... adolescence. I noticed that you love to portray the works that came out around that year, and give your vision about it, this must be the main reason for making the volumes like this, this must be the reason people complain about the pace, I don't know if it's because I read it everything you posted so far in a few days, but I didn't see this problem, probably if you were writing a book people wouldn't even notice this problem, it's your pace, and I hope you don't change it in the future just for our opinions readers. Thanks again. Taken from google.translate, sorry for any mistakes.

this chapter gave me a smile, thank you!

this scene is not well crafted, it seems very "timely" the arrival of help right at this moment, it could be better constructed if his father's arrival with help gave him the opportunity to escape where he was being held

any guild that sees a member with these skills try to at least raise him up to 1st or 2nd job.

Seriously? missed such a good chance to show that his harem are more than princesses in distress. That's sad. And take what I'm going to say next with a grain of salt, but I think it was just a tantrum, after all in the first interlude a lot of people said that Kimi did more in 1 chapter than the MC did in half an arc.

I think all the anger I feel about this arc will disappear if it destroys this clan, or at least kills the leader and all the elders.

NO, this system is awake, code 590

hue, where's the amazing demonic magic control?

For them to leave the village would be great, but the Uchihas are very arrogant, he would have to be reborn beforehand for his opinion to have weight... in addition to a huge logistics, to guarantee everyone's departure safely. But do you know a better way? Itachi kills the only radical uchiha elders and their supporters, leaves the villa as a wanted class S, this time real, and takes advantage and kills Danzou too

I dropped it in chapter 356, I didn't like the separation of the arc's ending... that said, it's a great webnovel, it sins a little in the information dump... but it has an engaging narrative that makes up for it. I tried to find out when Reen comes back, but I think until the current chapter he hasn't come back, maybe I have a chance in the future.