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ImmortalCake

ImmortalCake

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No, the cake is not a lie. The cake is simply immortal.

2017-06-11 JoinedUnited States
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  • ImmortalCake
    ImmortalCake5mth
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    This seems to be a blatant ripoff of the Meddling Giant from ff.net, pretty much word for word. Not sure what you were thinking? https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13801875/1/Meddling-Giant

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  • ImmortalCake
    ImmortalCake2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 321 The Half-Blood Prince
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    HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
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  • ImmortalCake
    ImmortalCake2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 67 Thunderstruck
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    Invictus: A Naruto Insert.
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  • ImmortalCake
    ImmortalCake2yr
    Commented

    poll is the correct spelling for what you wanted.

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    Tales of Demons and Gods : I can Augment My Statuses
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  • ImmortalCake
    ImmortalCake2yr
    Commented

    I prefer how it is so far, love the long chapters.

    Question on the story pacing: I prefer fleshing things out and taking my time, but I'm not sure if it is being somewhat of an impediment to the plot progression. If need be, I can try to streamline some things to get there quicker, (Chunin exams, specifically the beginning where Naruto meets a certain red haired Jinchuriki, happens in one or two chapters from now.) Should I quicken the pace, or do the slow and steady route. (Slow and steady will mean the story will probably be close to 1mil before it's done, if not longer.)
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    Invictus: A Naruto Insert.
    Anime & Comics · Raging_Smurf
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  • ImmortalCake
    ImmortalCake2yr
    Commented

    Bai?

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    In Kumogakure after adopting Hinata Hyuga.
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  • ImmortalCake
    ImmortalCake2yr
    Commented

    "but he was glade for Guy's disarming nature." -> glad

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    A readable Naruto fanfic. (Naruto, The Gamer, OC)
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  • ImmortalCake
    ImmortalCake3yr
    Commented

    If Izuna really wanted to see Kakashi without his mask while younger, couldn't he just use his X-Ray vision to see past his mask?

    Ch 34 34. The Lost Tower Part-1
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
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