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AlwaysPray

AlwaysPray

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2017-09-07 JoinedGlobal
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    AlwaysPray2yr
    Commented

    yet he didnt prepare sucks :/

    Liam being very malnourished and his current body lacking any physical training, it was no surprise that his starting attributes were all on the lower side.
    altalt
    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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    AlwaysPray3yr
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    Are you interested is doing a co-authorship? I like your writing style I have draft ideas for a Romance type, Mmorpg type, fantasy-adventure type

    altalt
    Races: Online ( VR Smartphone App )
    Games · RachelRuth
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    AlwaysPray3yr
    Posted

    The concept is very nice "sound" but one of the things i hate about the Jap novels are the cliche of romance/harems tbh it ruins the flow of the story better give the romance flavor to drama/romance theme novels. Also I only read up to chapter 5, It sucks that the story/character development is kinda rush... I hope the author learn how to make a good development. If I am the one writing this, I will put SOUND as a hidden air type magician ability with the MC becoming blind due to a accident/rival reasons. If u want isekai flavor It can also be done.

    altalt
    The Magician of Sound
    Sci-fi · Fixten
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