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Is this the guy with high IQ and served in the forces as an agemt?Pretty dumb he is.
Whats with the welp?
All the stereotypical writings is worthless.
Dropped right here.
Dumb as ****!!!
Emojis are used in conversations through text.Don't add it in a novel.
Technically he does not need any more weapons or accessories.He could get an artifact that could chose mortal champions and channel his dimensional energy after he tests them?You know a way to have influence on Earth,Cause from what i understand he would be comparable to Odin at his prime with the pace he has set soon enough
The MC is naive and gives a Naruto vibe,which I particularly hate.I read 20 chapters and all he is doing is whining and getting angry at the things he can't control.Not even training for the three months he was considered a slave and instead of being vengeful and planning to blow Mary jeoise to the high heavens and making escape a priority he is like mix of Naruto and Luffy.My main problem with the MC is his lack of initiative in anything hell he could have directly stored his collar in storage space and quietly staged an escape with the others.I counted 3 times he was saved by luck and sacrifice of others.He wasted three months and in a single moment of anger undo the effort that the other spend on him indicating that he is a pig teammate who pulls others into their troubles.I don't believe any of the current admirals in any country will be as rash and brash as this one.
Man this guy is dumb.He can't help himself and he is pitying others.
Ok you made all the hype pointless here.
Why the hell is he negotiating like a pussy?