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what the hell is with them wanting him to be dumb.... it makes no sense to tell him to make a more basic version

Sorry, but just no, I love the concept but so I tried to give it a shot. but Sorry by the time he has his wand hes already overpower as shit, that he has to master Transfiguration in 1 year... sorry but no not happening ( yeah i know its a book, but this is to much), I have no problems with overpower MCs, but actually make him work for it, it felt promising because of the repayment method, but then the system starts giving out living things... so another no for me. Clearly AI is used but its not bad, and honestly if you have nothing else to read give it a shot, but way to low on my list to actually put time into this novel.

Um... I doubt the case would be full of gold, he wouldn't be able to carry it, Standard breif case, fill it with gold... your looking to close to half a ton, people really forget that Gold is dense... So i doubt the case would be full

.... Loki would more have skill set in alchemy, its in his blood title after all God of Mischief, Lies, and Artifice.

lol didn't know it was a negotiation, I accept your terms

I think there is a problem with the Math, unless your classing 100million as a billion, otherwise there is no way with the stock they have plus there daily output could they sell over 6billion worth of product. even if they were Selling the device and making 150 profit on each one, selling 2 million of there devices would come to only 300million. So there needs to be a break down somewhere to explain how there making this much profit.

This really isn't bad, it has a lot of promise, but it did a big "Nope" for me which was reveal that he wasn't from this reality to another person . So for everyone else that hates that then be warned it happens. Other than that there is this strange 5 person bond thing that happens, which i don't hate, just don't really like it. If the above doesn't bother you then you will most likely like this novel, and honestly if it was for the big "Nope" thing from happening the Story development for me was just as high as other areas, so sorry but that "Nope" thing for me is a massive story development killer. So though Everything is High, that area ruins the overall avg for me. Keep up the great work, might re visit in the future.

yeah sorry that ruined it... which sucks this was actually turning into something good. though the whole 5 bonding things was a little annoying. But for me its a big No when it comes to others finding out your not from that reality

really enjoying this novel,

Tobho is a male, you wrote that "She glanced and Gendry"