Ironcarrot

Mannn u r really good at hooking people into your story😭😭😭😭 i cant stop reading until rudeus gets put in his place hopefully???

Out of everyone in the multiverse anissa why???????👎👎👎👎👎

What the f

Its pretty average, the characters feel way more small minded and everyone seems to have reduced intelligence.Also there is a lot of dumb face slapping going on. Literally everyone is like oh he missed the ball twice hes just a first year nothing special(even his own teamates!!!!!!) then bam homerun. Even more annoying is the random motivational speeches the MC gives every time they ask for his opinion, which is him saying cringeworthy stufff every time. So basically the story seems kind of depressing and you cant picture the characters actually saying the stuff they are saying

In a world full of unnatural curvy bodies she is flat as a board. Appearance who cares.

Its a decent read if not all the annoying descriptions. “He smiled in a relaxed demeanor despite the terrifying atmosphere” … “the pain on his face was severe and painful “ . AFTER EVERY SENTENCE IS A DESCRIPTION JUST LIKE THAT!!!!!

Arigatou!!

What a fireball ???? Its not fireball jutsu…. Itachi wat???? Please stop just stop with naruto if u dont know wat your saying. Still good story bro.

It is really average. Its just a repeat of the ame thing over and over. MC praises somebody after beating somebody at something it gets really cringy.

Never could get into dc with the hypocricy. Great fanfic tho