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You suck as a writer rewrite this please

That was harsh no child should have to watch there father beheaded like that I’m sorry but your character needs to learn compassion

naruto please

Bro keep going it’s a dope story for get what they say your a good writer

Can we get back to the story Shessh

Mm Be a a

To I love your writing I wish other writers on this site had your talent thank you for another awesome chapter

Can we move the story forward now Shessh

He needs to rewrite those chapters

Rewrite this please the past few chapters have been bad fix them please

Right that’s what I’m saying but he’s trying to kill him off he’s just wrong

You are absolutely right he lost his mind lieing to our faces like we can’ t read then had the gall to ask for power stones yea and your mom should have swallowed you smh so for ranting but you said it better then I ever could

Out of thousands of civilians only a hand full are left he went completely dark there is no redemption for this character he’s just like any other villain at this point

Can move forward with the story please

Your starting to go to far there’s a line that just shouldn’t be crossed and your on the edge why is he even at there village bro stop before there’s return

Your doing drear keep up the good work sir

because he's trying to be a good writer and he needs to know how to balance his characters out

it's called freedom of speech for a reason if you don't like what I said then respectfully f*** off I can say what I want it's my opinion