It's Pretty much just mtl. This isn't a translation. Why is this even here?
Story-wise, there's nothing to comment on mostly because it's really difficult to read.
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I just noticed this, can't Leo use Index' Spell Intercept and Sheol Fear since he can see the flaws in everything? The casters and magi will be crying.