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are you sure about that though. from what i know, people from the D family are against the world government. So they exist? even if it was really non existent as you said that wouldn't change anything since the author didn't have that information beforehand.
i have many questions. why does he act surprised or shocked at certain things even though he should know them beforehand? did he lose his memory or am i missing something? what is the point of having this so called method? i think it is useless so far since he is from the D family, his physical strength or skills make sense without that method. He doesn't seem to have any unique skills. To me he is just someone from the D family who trained hard and reached this level. So the addition of the method doesn't make any sense right now. is it like a late blooming kind of power that only get special later in the story? since he seem really normal so far.
it is cool and everything but he is really weak compared to all his advantages. Of course, i am not saying he should be as strong as the mercenary king. Not to mention, he seem to have the cliche plot of an abandoned young master from a powerful clan so there must be some hidden power that should awaken by now. Also, the valuable shard of divinty didn't really power him up that much even though it was hyped and treated like a rare item that is hardly found in the universe and fought for by powerful entities.
i don't. she is a hypocrite. if he wasn't her savior son, i wouldn't be surprised if she tried to supress him or even kill him because of how threatening he is. in the beginning, her personality make sense. she is a powerful politician for god sake. so what she did wasn't a surprise at all. now i am even more annoyed with her.
honestly, i think the way he deals with bella is definitely reasonable. please remember that if he was not the son of her so called savior, she wouldn't have regretted anything at all. she would even look at him and how he is acting and laugh at it. i actually hate her more now. at least in the beginning, she wasn't a hypocrite and her personality made sense. now i truly despise her and her stupid regret. as for the other one, i think the mc should give her a choice while she took care for him to ultimately help her husband, it is just human nature. afterall, it is not a given that everyone has to help you with no reason at all.
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what happened to your story man? i always looked forward to the new chapters but now they are either full of fillers or nothing like this one. it seem like you are trying to drag to increase the number of chapters for no reason. i did not want to comment negatively like this but this is because i absolutely like this story. it is actually one of the reasons as to why i downloaded the app agian and started to read these story after a long time.
it's good that you didn't take the criticism personally. for some reasons, authors in this website do so.
it's been a while since i posted a comment. however, i love this novel and that's why i have to be honest. i don't care about what happened to will as it was bound to happen, he lowered his gaurd and forgot that people can get dirty to achieve there goals which is a mistake people make in the modern world. however, the way you did it was of such low quality that i was left speechless. while the novel is by no way perfect, it's still written in a good quality. i hope that you rewrite this later when you have the motivation to do so. this is just my feedback and no pressure my dear author when facing criticism. it only shows how much regard we have for you and your story.
It's pretty clear