I would give it a better review even though i think mine is still generous since i like most novels, but it hasn't been updated for half a year, and we still gotta pay for the chapters when it isn't even finished. if it was finished, I would understand, but why do we gotta pay for something that got dropped? I hate having to wait a day or spend money on a chapter in a book that'll never finish. drop it from the site or discontinue the required stones/passes.

the first half before Quinn was put to sleep for years was great, but now it doesn't make sense to me. it seems forced to make more chapters, and the power system is all out of whack not to mention the main antagonist can somehow brainwash people incredibly stronger than him with no effort, and he somehow cut off the connection between the Mc and his followers even though he should not have that power and it'd be near impossible considering how strong the Mc is. and now there are werewolves? It seems kinda forced, considering we have never heard about them until it allows normal humans to live forever like the vampires to push the plot. and instead of focusing on one thing, it seems incredibly chaotic since the Mc is jumping around and doing different things while his friends are basically puppets or are just slaves to their instincts even though they constantly train both physically and mentally. then super op beings show up out of nowhere or are instantly op to the point of fighting the Mc which has become basically a God at this point and far above what they are or should be capable of yet forced plot makes it so they can fight even with him which shouldn't be possible even if he isnt using "celestial energy". and even when he can end it (which he definitely can), he just leaves them so they can continue to brainwash other friends and family of his (which again it shouldn't be possible because of the system and the bond between creator and created) unless somehow the antagonist knows everything about the system not to mention the people he brainwashed are all at a power level that could crush him so how did it happen? and now he is focusing on other things instead of helping his friends, which also doesn't make sense even if it's to become stronger since in his section of the universe he is the strongest considering the "celestial energy" should be constantly reinforcing his body even if he doesn't actually use it to fight. so why is he struggling against a being who should be an ant to him, not to mention the brainwashed were just a little weaker than him so how did a guy who had nothing to his name after the defeat of the dalkie somehow get so much influence and power when everyone should know for a fact that he is the bad guy through countless writings and files that should have been passed down through the generations since he didn't die when the Mc went to sleep. there is no way he would have been able to get rid of all of that. all the antagonist is is a cunning original which the Mc has no difficulty smacking the rest around but he can't for this one who might be slightly stronger than the others but he isn't at a level where he can capture and restrain beings that should be stronger than him. the first half of the book is great, but the rest is forced plot to continue with the story and crappy writing to me.

"blocked by distance"

Are you sure it ain't the other way around?

tf just happened

why was it brought to them?

then why was it brought to them?

finally some action

it looks like it could be a great novel but as I continued I noticed a change in the fact that it seems unedited and partially machine translated and as I got some of the extra privilege chapters they ended up just being repeat chapters from around 20 chapters back and from what I've seen from comments they have no plan on changing them to the actual chapters until it hits public and it would be nice if you just got rid of those tiers so people don't spend money on it when they dont actually get what they paid for and they could be supporting a different book instead of paying for chapters that have already been released and read

he is such a devoted friend

hmm experience death over and over again... I wonder who that sounds like

well at least it'll be changed eventually

this entire paragraph....

so true

ik your pain

lol love it

thanks for the spoilers bro

i wish i could do that

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon