hell it is one o the bt

Omg hel iy s one of the vest

This is the best! Probably one of the best in this. ajjfbdhsjjsnsjwjsjsnsbdhudiakaksjbdjdjdidkxkkcidiejrbudjfirjeieowokwbhfifjdbuejrurjrjrjejebrjrrnne

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I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)

TThe synopsis is really good, it attracts my attention quickly and it's really interesting and i can't wait for the other chapters. I'm looking forward to Piolo's battle in life. Can't wait also to the other characters will show

TThe synopsis is really good, it attracts my attention quickly and it's really interesting and i can't wait for the other chapters. I'm looking forward to Piolo's battle in life. Can't wait also to the other characters will show

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Mabuhay ka! Lime_Gray!

Thank you so much! I appreciate it.

Thank you so much! I appreciate it.