Melayu

obviously there's no proofreader for this work....

I'd say that the novel concept is interesting but after enduring 18 chapters, i find the mc development is too fast. the storyline is sketchy and not developed well. certain plot advancement are missing making it confusing to the readers.

MC's personality was changed too. He did not care if his actions killed so many innocents.

author totally butchered the plot from chapter 229.....

did author changed the plot? 1st Mo Ling was erased, then Manman changed to a young woman and also seems to have been with MC for quite a long time from her monologue.

what happened to Mo Ling?

sorry I should say coins instead of SP

good thing that these earlier chapters are still free to read with all the repetitions. If these cost us SP, it will be very annoying. author please take note

Chapters 8, 9, 10 & 11 have conflicted plot for the 2nd disciple recruitment. Author please clean up the plot and delete the unnecessary chapters.

Since MC knows light heal magic, why doesn't he use it to heal his arm?