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Frightassasin

Frightassasin

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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin10d
    Posted

    the book after 109 seems disorganized and out of order. the translation just seems off and they add names or change names that make the story more confusing

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    The Era of Gods
    Sci-fi · Become a Taoist Overnight
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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin10d
    Commented

    hey after this page the rest seemed to be mixed up or out of order and idk why

    Ch 109 Chapter 109 Relic Shards The Changes of the Creation Rubik's Cube
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    The Era of Gods
    Sci-fi · Become a Taoist Overnight
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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin11d
    Commented

    What I don't understand

    Ch 111 Chapter 111: Ancient Godly Card—Divine Sanctuary
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    The Era of Gods
    Sci-fi · Become a Taoist Overnight
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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin2mth
    Commented

    is instead of are

    "How much are the contraband here worth?"
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    Star Citizen Online: Isekai Edition
    Sci-fi · Trafford
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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin2mth
    Commented

    kill

    "Get up, you fuckers, and go and ill the intruder! It's just one man, and there are a hundred of us!"
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    Star Citizen Online: Isekai Edition
    Sci-fi · Trafford
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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin4mth
    Commented

    should be chickens not bees

    "My Lord. The number of livestock has grown exponentially throughout the last couple of months, to the point that we had to clear some forests for them or relocate them to other territories. But in return a plentiful harvest is produced. The most frequent product produced id the milk from the moongazing cows and starbeard goats as well as the eggs from the honeyglimmer bees. The truffle boars and sky horn sheep products are a longer-term product. 
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    Rise of Power: Journey of Kingdoms
    Fantasy · Warrior_Blade
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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin4mth
    Commented

    wait not lait

    As the time passed the soldiers of Verdant Vale did not have to lait to long before the sound of steel clattering against each other could be heard and a few soldiers on horseback could be seen slowly walking forward, bearing the emblem of the Kingdom of Argenthrall." 
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    Rise of Power: Journey of Kingdoms
    Fantasy · Warrior_Blade
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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin5mth
    Commented

    Change to Angela

    "I think I told you clearly of what I would want, and no, it's not only because of that you dummy, it's because of her ability, it's affecting her, making her cold and detached, if neither one of us do anything, Carla will end up being one of those ice-queens that you can see walking around, flaunting their arrogance and power, I hate them, I don't want her to become one of them."
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    Villain Support Agency ( On Hiatus )
    Fantasy · TheReign
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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin8mth
    Commented

    u should format all the points the same

    [Fourth place: Human Race—Lord of The Blazing Sun—71.1 million faction points!]
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    Global Lord: 100% Drop Rate
    Games · A Green Bird
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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin8mth
    Commented

    My birthday is also July 23rd

    Ch 712 The enemy of my enemy is my friend
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    My Werewolf System
    Fantasy · JKSManga
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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin8mth
    Commented

    get the genders correct is it her or him

    However, he had also disappeared during the prisoner raid.
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    On The Day Of My 100th Blind Date, I Arrested My Date
    Urban · Braking In Time
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  • Frightassasin
    Frightassasin1yr
    Commented

    um at the end you need to change wen yu to wailing snake

    Ch 1812 Wailing Snake
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    Fey Evolution Merchant
    Eastern · Amber Button
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