Wow, what a waste. A company profitable enough to be sold for near limitless money means it could passively generate that amount of money anyway. Litterally selling the golden goose here. Also, as an inventor, just having money alone is not enough for you to buy materials for your inventions. In America, most important materials are not available to civilians no matter how rich. A large company with millitary contracts and connections is far more useful. You can buy restricted materials through said sompany. It’s how Bruce Wayne gets all the materials for his fun gadgets and toys.

Bro got ripped off. Payed 700,000 points for a used model of Bumblebee with broken com and then had to pay extra to fix him. For that price tag, should’ve just been a brand new Bumblebee.

There’s flower that can reduce the influence of the Netherworld aura? Why is this entire mountain not planted with this flower? Maybe then, you’d have more disciples. Also from my experiences, any kind of plants that grow in weird places like this are also valuable medicinal ingredients. Imagine udumbra flower nourished by the netherworld aura for 500 years? 1000 years?

Nope, this is the wrong way to go. You played right into Fury’s hands. Shame. With your meta knowledge you could’ve entered into it at a much better position of strength. Allowed Fury to lead you around like a lost puppy.

Why not? The Convergence just makes space rifts that connect random places in the 9 realms. One of them happens to connect to the place where the reality stone is hidden. It’s not like it’s in a whole different dimension. The space stone can just make the same portal once you know where the hidden location is. If he didn’t have the space stone then yea, he would have to wait for the convergence.

You have the entire record of the past. Search up when Asgard defeated the dark elves to see where they hid the aether/reality stone then get it with the space stone. Repeat this process with the power stone. Power power level yourself until you can equip 3 stones. Space, Power, and Reality Go beat up Thanos. Write your next fanfic.

You can explain it easily. He’s very passionate in his Cosplay Hobby. If Bruce Wayne can get stuff for his Spurlunking you can get stuff for your Cosplay.

Meh it’s not a matter of you being powerful enough. Minato is plenty powerful even when he died young and couldn’t truly reached his full potential. You just don’t know how to fight for crap and can’t even use effectively 100% of what you already have. Getting more templates is a waste. Fuinjutsu is fucking broken. MCU Thanos is honestly not that super powerful without all the stones. Half of the team literally almost got the gauntlet off of him on Titan before starlord fucked it up. If Fuinjutsu can seal up demons and tailbeasts you can seal up one mad Titan But if you’re dead set on giving him more templates author, please don’t do Uchiha Madara. This is your chance to be unique and creative. Pick something else.

Clearly you need more practice with using flying thunder god in combat. Once you’ve placed that seal on someone it’s gg. You should never need to counter anything straight on like this.

Bella? Bella!?

The first sentence in this paragraph reads like the droid is inside his nanosuit and not how you intend for it to be. You’ve already established that he’s wearing the suit. So it’s not needed to repeat again.

Kai Carter. A bit of an odd combination. But it could’ve been worse. Could’ve been Bob Uchiha.

Would there have been a different secret system if he had decided to be a villain?

Wow. What happen? First 2 paragraphs started so well with nice and proper looking sentences. Punctuations we’re in the right places. Things that needed to be capitallized were capitalized. It’s Like you forgot your basic English for the rest of the chapter. Or stopped trying.

Nope pretty sure he just has a shitty friend that likes to drug his drinks.

Earth having higher gravity would make everything on it denser and shorter. Humans, vamps, werewolves. There would be no exception. But since only the vamps are “dense” it’s not the gravity but simply a built in feature of their race. What’s The actual physical Cause? Who knows. Also who cares?

You mean his slashing hand is all right.

You could do that. But I wouldn’t Hard commit to such a strict limit. There are lots of fun to be had with POV changes so long as you put in the effort to dI them properly.

Nice chapter. May I suggest that in the future, if you’re Going to be doing multiple POV changes in one chapter, especially short changes back and forth, that you just write everything in third person POV instead of switching back and forth between different people’s First person POV. It would definitely Make your chapter smoother to read and transition.

He’s just going make an entire magical discipline Just like that? On the spot in only 6 hours? Are you sure his power isn’t Arc of Embodiment instead? We all know that Occlumency is the magical art of protecting your mind from mental attack. But how does he even knows how to do it in practice. And doesn’t The practice of Occlumency Also requires you to get attacks repeatedly In order to build up the defense?