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Ashywar

Ashywar

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Just a normal guy interested in stories

2017-04-15 JoinedIndia
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar6d
    Commented

    Everyone in the class is 5-6 years old. Do you even remember what you were like at that time in your life. I also don't understand how everyone is like propaganda is bad. It's normal to want to work for betterment of the society and people you grow up with. Those who don't are know as PSYCHOPATHS.

    'Hey, why are you so bold with this propaganda? At this point any person with at least half a brain will see through it or at least will find that something isn't right, right?'
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    Naruto: Time Traveler
    Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar6d
    Commented

    You are only going back 3 days. Not much difference if you train.

    Entering the academy is not going to happen any time soon. I still have a year or two to wait for that. So maybe I should train my body a little bit by running, I don't want to push myself too hard knowing that all the efforts will probably be wasted if I will do time travel. Also training the body at such a young age to much will likely be harmful.
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    Naruto: Time Traveler
    Anime & Comics · Sycore_w
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar7d
    Commented

    Its not about sounding better, its about using a language properly.

    I change Miras name to just be a double barrel surname since people keep complaining about the Nee bit. Personally I think it sounds better with the Nee but hey oh
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    HP/DC: Satan Soul
    Anime & Comics · Bigbrick
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar3mth
    Posted

    initially the story started out good and was very interesting but now after 400+ chapters it's become dull and boring. There has been a new villain introduced whose existence doesn't make sense with the restrictions he has been operating in moreover the plot feels forced. I will probably check in 100 more chapters if there has been any improvement but presently it's not worth spending your money on.

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    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    Sci-fi · Agent_047
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar5mth
    Posted

    Stop stealing other people's work. This story can be read fully on FanFiction.net. Webnovel needs to setup a system to report stolen works.

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    (..x..)
    Anime & Comics · UchihaMadara_sama
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar5mth
    Posted

    This is a copy paste of someone else's work on Fanfiction.net. Support the actual author and read at the link below. It also has the full chapters.https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13801875/1/0

    This book has been deleted.
  • Ashywar
    Ashywar7mth
    Posted

    very badly written with the story going all over the place.

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    Enigma of Tsukirai Hatake
    Anime & Comics · Purplesplinter
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar10mth
    Posted

    Very badly written story with no character following any logic and more importantly no direction. The biggest thing is the inability of the author to understand the time periods involved and its effect on people and social development. If you want to kill your brain cells the please read this.

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    In Game Of Thrones World with LOTR system
    Movies · Just_for_fun1997
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar10mth
    Commented

    Take your time bro. Health is the priority. We can wait for some chapters.

    Ch 116 CORN IS BACKKKK!!!
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    Fairy Tail: Shinigami
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar10mth
    Commented

    hope he gets better soon

    Ch 115 Update: From Corn’s friend.
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    Fairy Tail: Shinigami
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar11mth
    Commented

    +1

    2. Naruto The Untouchable
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    Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)
    Anime & Comics · kamidemond
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar11mth
    Commented

    bro don't want to nit-pick but if he wants to live as he wants there's literally no reason for him to stay on earth. He has the resources to explore the universe.

    Ch 5 Joining civilization.
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    Marvel's Sentinel
    Movies · Neuromancerrrr
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar11mth
    Commented

    Man this kind of stuff needs to be edited. Not cool bro.

    Of course, being a conscientious person, Josh despised human trafficking. But if it was selling Japanese chicks, that was another matter. Japanese were not humans, so there was no problem.
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    Marvel Plane Trader
    Anime & Comics · FicNovels
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar11mth
    Commented

    This part happened in an enclosed room so there was no sun

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)
    Anime & Comics · kamidemond
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar1yr
    Commented

    I get that he wants to survive but why is he attacking empire soldiers. There is no reason for it, he is not even getting experience to level up.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Surviving The First Day
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    Rebellion of His Creations (SI)
    Anime & Comics · Daoist_KittyKat
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar1yr
    Commented

    +1

    NO
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    A New World In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · GhoulKingJay
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar2yr
    Commented

    Get well soon. Please update only if you are well.

    Ch 33 UPDATE
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    Naruto: World of Warcraft
    Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar3yr
    Commented

    The story has gone totally down the drain. Not worth reading at all.

    Ch 214 C214 Next
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar3yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 293 Back to the Tribe
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    Death... and me
    Fantasy · Suiyan
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  • Ashywar
    Ashywar3yr
    Posted

    Very poorly written and haphazard story Not worth bothering to read even 40 chapters in trial read. The character is one dimensional and there doesn't seem to be any plot at all for the story. Total waste of time.

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    Forging The Path To Godliness
    Eastern · King Demigod
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