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Story and all was okayish even though the Characters are not the brightest in the Shed, Danzo got a massive IQ debuff and Mikoto feels more like an innocent Ghost took over her Body instead of the Real deal. The moment the R18 started everything dipped massively. Story development slowed down to a crawl, at least every second chapter is R18 and the Writing Quality in General just took a Nosedive. Im not talking about Logic holes that the Setting creates, that is a whole other thing...

Hat?

and he still has Rae's passive as well... Not someone you want to go unarmed against.

I just started with the story and will later update the Review so take everything with a grain of Salt. The writing as a whole is okay it just has many cases where you use 2 or 3 adjectives for a single word or where the tenses of the words switch midsentence and get confused. I would guess that it gets fixed somewhere within the novel, but the first 100 Chapters will probably need a rework or Edit to fix it. A simple solution would be the usage of a program to just quickly edit the Text. Something like Grammarly would do. I don't know if that is also the reason why sometimes the Characters just sound and feel like they are just teens even though its stated that they are Adults and sometimes even in their forties. That would be the reason for 3/5 for Writing Quality. The Story as a whole is quite good and the Character and World Design so far was nice as well. If the Quality of the writing improves I'm fairly certain that this novel will more or less force you to binge read it which I really like and enjoy. So Overall a really nice Novel that could go well with a little editing

Thanks for the Chapter, Just to note it down 10x10 meters would be 100 Square meters there shouldn't be a 10 x 10 square meter. Also, 5 times 10x10 would be 50x10 and not 50x50 so the factor you used here would be 25 instead of 5 as you wanted. but since its a slice of life novel and math, I will just let it slide :D

There is kind of Yuri. There are 1 or 2 threesomes. as far as I saw there are no scenes of Yuri without the MC involved.

I hope you get better soon. And please edit the chapter after the "Bad News" so it wont mess with the Chapter order.

the correct name to use here would be Isaiah since Valper doesn't know him under the name Kiba

My Review will probably change in the near future or with more Chapters but I recommend you to use an App/Site/program to grammar check your text. I Dropped Chapter 8 into "Grammarly" the site I use, and it found a bit over 100 Mistakes within a 1014 Wort Chapter. 46 of which you could fix with the free version and within probably 3 Minutes of Work, the rest would need the Premium Version so don't mind them for now. I HIGHLY Recommend you to use a site to check your Grammar.

first time in his life? he already went outside last weekend to summon boss monsters though?