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it took me awhile to notice but every one of your mcs is severely antisocial and while some have actual reasons for it most dont. I get you want something to work towards but this is kind of becoming a crutch for you all your main characters end up with is like 3-4 people they can stand to be around with the exception of billy
stuff can be as dark as you want just make it make sense you have a system guide theres no real reason for there to be an AI in the first place him being a little silly is fine but there are limits if you needed him to become an incubus like this there was no need for a race change a few chapters ago