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  • ujda
    ujda3mth
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    I wish it were as you wrote. However, every person uses 100 percent of his brain unless he has a biological problem. This leads us to the conclusion that people are generally stupid.

    "Human brain development is between 5% and 10%. More than 10% of people are generally called geniuses, so you belong to the category of idiots."
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    New Staff of S. H. I. E. L. D.
    Movies · Professional Slacking
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  • ujda
    ujda5mth
    Commented

    What's the point of adding a ridiculous Cultivator? So what's the point of the system? The red alert system has become completely irrelevant. It was turned into an ordinary system whose only feature was to print soldiers. I don't need to read any further. It's not hard to guess what's going on. The whole system will become a tool to suppress the cultivator. All technology will become merely ancillary. You took back all the hopes I had from the name with interest

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Killing the Mutant Dog
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    Last Commander of the Red Alert
    Video Games · maxNkoga
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Replied to Ah_ren

    30 yaşındayım. Arada sırada basit, kafa dağıtmalık birşeyler okumak için fena değil burası. Şu sıralar Asimov'un vakıf serisine başladım. Çok güzel akıyor ancak kesintisiz okuyunca arada sırada başka şeyler okuyup kafa dağıtmak için buraya düşüyorum. Ha birde yolculuk sırasında iyi oluyor.

    Ch 17 God Hands(rewrite)
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    Black Swordsman in Konoha
    Anime & Comics · Ah_ren
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Replied to Ah_ren

    Ben eskiden yorum yapmak, günlük girişler vs yollarla yapmıştım. O zamanlar daha kolaydı. Şuan durum ne ben de bilmiyorum.

    Ch 17 God Hands(rewrite)
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    Black Swordsman in Konoha
    Anime & Comics · Ah_ren
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Replied to Ah_ren

    Aynen kardeşim. Soracağın veya konuşmak istediğin bir şey varsa Türkçe sorabilirsin.

    Ch 17 God Hands(rewrite)
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    Black Swordsman in Konoha
    Anime & Comics · Ah_ren
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Commented

    I think the course of the story has become much more stable. The balance between the parties has been healthy

    Ch 17 God Hands(rewrite)
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    Black Swordsman in Konoha
    Anime & Comics · Ah_ren
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Replied to Ah_ren

    I don't think it will be a problem as long as you have good power balance, which is an issue with most fan-made series. For example, the 4th hokage has the power to stop the bijudama of the 10-tailed beast. This is a more difficult feat than stopping many exploding nuclear weapons. If you write equal or slightly stronger than Void from the hands of God, the balance of power will be better. Also, if you prevent the god's hands from easily doing whatever they want, the god's hands will have to plan. Therefore, a structure will be created that is open to writing more scenarios. An excessive shift of the balance of power to one side will either make the bad side unqualified or cause a situation where you have to create excessive drama content for the good side and make it believable. Sorry if I sound like I'm giving too much advice. I hope I didn't bore you.

    Ch 15 How do you think Black Swordsman in Konoha should continue?
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    Black Swordsman in Konoha
    Anime & Comics · Ah_ren
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Commented

    Frankly, it seemed ridiculous to me that the wise of the 6 ways were defeated by the hand of god. Because the wise of the 6 paths is almost powerful enough to create a planet. Other than that, the appearance of the god's hand in Naruto's past seemed counter-fiction. Because the space crack initially seemed to have just formed with the arrival of Guts. I think it would make more sense if the hands of god were to refrain from the wise of the 6 ways and run away every time they felt him.

    Ch 15 How do you think Black Swordsman in Konoha should continue?
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    Black Swordsman in Konoha
    Anime & Comics · Ah_ren
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Posted

    While this script is inclusive about scp objects in general, it generally makes the same mistake that most bad edits do. It tries to glorify the main character by making rival or hostile characters and institutions stupid. However, this only makes the main character look like an idiot who beats idiots. It puts Kalkan, who we know as smart, and his employees in the position of stupid. This makes the whole plot frustrating. To me, this series is a wasted potential. If he had a calmer and more sensible writing style, maybe he would have been way above the average.

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    Ohh Sh*t, I'm in Marvel
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Commented

    Under these circumstances, I think the most logical option is weapons such as axes, which are more suitable for beheading and splitting. In addition, since it has a thick steel, it does not break easily and it is practical because it can be easily replaced even if the handle is broken. In addition, when changing the handle length, you can adjust the height according to you. The dagger can be a support tool for close range, but it makes more sense not to put zombies in close range due to the risk of infection. Carrying a firearm or crossbow for long distance will provide much more efficient life support.

    Kohta is definitely someone I'm saving, his skills with a gun are top notch and with my [ Emperor Eyes ] I'll be able to copy the skill for myself, increasing my chances for survival. Same with Saeko, though I'll most likely be sticking with daggers as they are more practical to use than a katana and I've trained with them ever since I read 'Solo Leveling' since I thought they were cool.
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    Highschool Of The Dead (HOTD): The Reincarnate
    Anime & Comics · Abyssal_King_
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Commented
    Marvel...., it is estimated only the DC universe and one or two more world can be as dangerous as this.
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    Ohh Sh*t, I'm in Marvel
    Movies · Adam001
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Commented
    Marvel...., it is estimated only the DC universe and one or two more world can be as dangerous as this.
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    Ohh Sh*t, I'm in Marvel
    Movies · Adam001
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Posted

    There is definitely a problem with the perception of time in this novel. As if everyone is not even 1 day away from everywhere. But the general flow of the story is good and there is a main character who does not abuse his power. Frankly, I was incredibly tired of constantly reading the main character with a disgusting personality. I hate all chinese novels that pass this disgusting character typing off as normal. That's why I enjoyed seeing characters in this story who are normal but have saintly morals compared to Chinese novels. I'm on episode 26 right now. The main character is still on the good side. I hope it goes like this. He does not revert to the main character model in Chinese novels whom the author addresses as good people, but who is r.cist, rap.st, and often an empowered idiot.

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    One Piece : Kingdom Building System
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Commented

    Why is everyone and everything 1 day away? Anyway. Except for this case, the overall story is good.

    Ch 24 Chapter 24: Who Is The Figure That Defeated Whitebeard?
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    One Piece : Kingdom Building System
    Anime & Comics · Arsone
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Replied to ujda

    Non non biyori

    Ch 242 [Poll]
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    Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
    Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
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  • ujda
    ujda1yr
    Commented

    Alice of life

    Ch 242 [Poll]
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    Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!
    Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
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  • ujda
    ujda2yr
    Commented

    I don't like giving personality to the system. I already think that with the help of the system, the excessive op character will become even more op and make the story meaningless. I don't like op character stories. Because there is no story. Maybe I'm contradicting the general audience. However, this idea of ​​"if the character doesn't beat everyone, everything is bad, if he beats everyone, it's good" started to make me sick to my stomach.

    Ch 17 Chapter-17
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    With Naruto System
    Fantasy · MrNine
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  • ujda
    ujda2yr
    Posted

    It's a pretty good series. He does not ignore the rest of the world and the history of science when he says he will do a Chinese beautification. It's pretty fun to read. I hope more to come.

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    College Construction: My Principal System
    Urban · 50 for a thousand words
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  • ujda
    ujda2yr
    Posted

    Copy paste ,..................................................................................................... . .... ........ ...........

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    Forest Survival: From Logging to Login
    Fantasy · Ayde Gallius
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  • ujda
    ujda2yr
    Commented

    I don't understand why zero basis in math and science. Come on, the owner of the body does not know, but the current owner of the mind is someone else. So the mind, the current owner of the body, was also stupid? I don't like productions where power rains from the sky on stupid characters and these powers are used for stupid purposes. If you read one or two more chapters and don't like them, I will remove them from my library.

    Ch 1 Expulsion Crisis? the System Activated!
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    My World has Turned into Experience Points
    Urban · Hundred-fold Experience
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