FortuneEternal

Grats on reaching the first million words! Hopefully it'll reach 100 million or even 1 triliion words and beyond! 🤩

You already call the future with christmas special, right? Try to tell a bit of future here and then without spoiling the story the best you could. Try to play a multiverse or something to diversified the story, and fleshing out more characters from the MCU or Marvel comics, being too focused on Slick's character development might make it harder to introduce the OG marvel. You can even call Marvel characters' families, like uncle ben's peter parker, or Howard stark like the other comments. In the 3nd, all's well and good. Keep up the amazing work

Slowly turning dewey into confidant could also be a good turning point, make him fully guard his ex wife to make him be more in despair while protective could also be a good choice

Author, have you post this book in another platform? Webnovel recently deleted fanfictions, just to be safe, post it in another platform

Tftc!

Can you share the original name of the book if you're translating them and want to drop them? Both the story and translation are good, but it's still too soon to gather more reader since fanfiction translation usually gather more chapter after at least 50 or even 100 chapters

It's cool how you develop the story, it's filled with character development with Ricky as the main vocal. Keep up with the good works author, thanks!

Tftc author! Now, let's talk about the usage of the system, one of the main point of this story is the system, but the MC didn't fully uses it. why? I don't really understand but, i assume it's because not every women will get a mission for it, right? Cmiiw, but if that's true, then you need to write them repeatedly in a different way. You might use some monologue like "oh, a target... Haven't seen it in a while" or narration that explains it. For power up, you don't need to fully write the smut in details. Although it's cool and i like them. It'd be hard to continue since the story will ve repetitive and you'd be bored of writing them and feel tedious. Interact with important character only, and just skip it for some C,D,E grade people. Anyhow, the story is great. Keep up the good work! Thank you for your diligence and have a nice day

you can put them at the end of the chapter, or just abbreviate them without adding explanations unnecessarily. make a line when you want to put an info dump, like start it with a ____ item a, b, c ,d ____ then end it with another to make it easier for reader to skip them

Thanks for the great chapters as always author... Info dump isn't a trouble at all, but you can also make an information table at the bottom for additional text. Showing then at the middle of the story can jeopardize immersion. Anyhow, it's a great chapter